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Array ( [sid] => 49643 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => simple expression [time] => 2004-05-29 19:24:38 [hometext] => made with hope silent-no-more enjoys. threw together quickly not my best [bodytext] => when I
found you
I knew
how to
show my
true way
full love
every day
take care
of deeds
fufill all
your needs
what words
cause smiles
when to
travel miles
how to
read you
what things
to do
to simply
have you
and now
I have
my heart
as a badge
on my
shirt sleave
asking now
never leave
for without
your soul
my heart
loses control

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simple expression

Contributed by holderofthestone on Saturday, 29th May 2004 @ 07:24:38 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

when I
found you
I knew
how to
show my
true way
full love
every day
take care
of deeds
fufill all
your needs
what words
cause smiles
when to
travel miles
how to
read you
what things
to do
to simply
have you
and now
I have
my heart
as a badge
on my
shirt sleave
asking now
never leave
for without
your soul
my heart
loses control

Copyright © holderofthestone ... [ 2004-05-29 19:24:38]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: simple expression (User Rating: 1 )
by Overstated on Saturday, 29th May 2004 @ 07:49:30 PM AEST
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although you say it was thrown together - i quite like this piece has an unusual style

Re: simple expression (User Rating: 1 )
by arden on Saturday, 29th May 2004 @ 08:53:54 PM AEST
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again this was so differently written.
you have very nice style.
this was great.
i enjoyed it alot.
Arden

Re: simple expression (User Rating: 1 )
by Silent-No-More on Saturday, 29th May 2004 @ 09:47:40 PM AEST
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I'm speechless, holder. I know just how quickly you "threw this together" and am completely without the ability to understand how you could possibly have crammed so much into it in such a short time.

Absolutely, incredibly unbelievable. Just... well... WOW

Re: simple expression (User Rating: 1 )
by Avarice_Riot on Sunday, 30th May 2004 @ 03:19:42 AM AEST
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Definitely the most unique poem I have read today and for something that you just threw together, it has both substance and style. Well done.

Re: simple expression (User Rating: 1 )
by Living_In_My_Dream on Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 04:46:12 AM AEST
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you should throw things together more often...lol they come out great but taking your time they turn into masterpieces...lol I love all your work...even if they were simply 2 or 3 or 4 words long they all having meanthing they all are powerfulI loved this one as all the others....
much love,
Dani
xoxoxo

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