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Array ( [sid] => 49640 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => those three words [time] => 2004-05-29 19:02:46 [hometext] => when i finally came to realize... [bodytext] => Three little words are all I live to hear
to brighter my world a little,
to make my world more real,
to make me more whole,
to give me a reason to enjoy life...
and yet you hold back,
you force the words down,
you keep it inside,
you make me guess....
and when im forced to guess,
I look at your actions,
I cant hear what you say,
I only see your wrong doings
and im crushed...
becuase I finally see,
no matter what I do,
no matter what I say,
you will never say those three words...

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those three words

Contributed by holderofthestone on Saturday, 29th May 2004 @ 07:02:46 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Three little words are all I live to hear
to brighter my world a little,
to make my world more real,
to make me more whole,
to give me a reason to enjoy life...
and yet you hold back,
you force the words down,
you keep it inside,
you make me guess....
and when im forced to guess,
I look at your actions,
I cant hear what you say,
I only see your wrong doings
and im crushed...
becuase I finally see,
no matter what I do,
no matter what I say,
you will never say those three words...

Copyright © holderofthestone ... [ 2004-05-29 19:02:46]
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Re: those three words (User Rating: 1 )
by Overstated on Saturday, 29th May 2004 @ 07:07:13 PM AEST
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those three words dont sound like words you wanna hear ;)

nice write really good like a rant near the end and all the better for it!

-feel free to look at my work will look out for your..

Re: those three words (User Rating: 1 )
by arden on Saturday, 29th May 2004 @ 08:56:15 PM AEST
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this was very sad. filled with such awesome emotion.
this was pure greatness.
loved it.
i look forward to more of your works.
Arden

Re: those three words (User Rating: 1 )
by Silent-No-More on Saturday, 29th May 2004 @ 09:07:15 PM AEST
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I'm running out of words, holder.

Sadly, I'm left with one thought after reading this one.... what's she's not telling you (those three words) is telling you everything you need to know. It kind of breaks my heart to say that... but... I think you already know it. And... honestly... I think she's the one missing out.

I am, always, overcome by your writing. *big sigh*

Re: those three words (User Rating: 1 )
by HellsLibrarian on Thursday, 10th June 2004 @ 12:18:47 AM AEST
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How wistful.

Re: those three words (User Rating: 1 )
by Living_In_My_Dream on Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 04:49:49 AM AEST
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you will hear those three words eventually it should be from someone who cares...I mean if she doesnt want to say them she doesnt care you dont want to hear them from someone who doesnt care...you will have a better future with the one girl who will say those words and you will feel the same about her....no one wants to hear those words come out of someone who doesnt mean them I loved this wrote spectacular....remember what I said lol
much love,
Dani
xoxoxo

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