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Array ( [sid] => 49531 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Daydream [time] => 2004-05-28 21:16:43 [hometext] => [bodytext] => jumping up, falling down
swirling, twirling, whirling 'round
through the wind, I'm flying free
walking on top of the mists of the sea
swinging high, swinging low
up and down I go
through the dew I feel the grass
it caresses my rough little feet as I pass
the chirping of doves I suddenly hear
brings an essence of peace to my ear
swinging high, swinging low
up and down I go
seconds before are gone and passed
but little sunlight and moonlight memories last
I'm like a fairy, flying with grace and care
my wings shall guide me everywhere
swinging high, swinging low
up and down I go [comments] => 5 [counter] => 166 [topic] => 14 [informant] => LittleWillow [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DreamsandWishes )

Daydream

Contributed by LittleWillow on Friday, 28th May 2004 @ 09:16:43 PM in AEST
Topic: DreamsandWishes

jumping up, falling down
swirling, twirling, whirling 'round
through the wind, I'm flying free
walking on top of the mists of the sea
swinging high, swinging low
up and down I go
through the dew I feel the grass
it caresses my rough little feet as I pass
the chirping of doves I suddenly hear
brings an essence of peace to my ear
swinging high, swinging low
up and down I go
seconds before are gone and passed
but little sunlight and moonlight memories last
I'm like a fairy, flying with grace and care
my wings shall guide me everywhere
swinging high, swinging low
up and down I go

Copyright © LittleWillow ... [ 2004-05-28 21:16:43]
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Re: Daydream (User Rating: 1 )
by TheSchroedmeister on Friday, 28th May 2004 @ 09:24:35 PM AEST
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A worthy escape in my time of need. Thank you for sharing this one at this moment, it made me feel a little better

Re: Daydream (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 28th May 2004 @ 09:26:15 PM AEST
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I love the way you write. I sometimes think dreams and wishes are the only thing that keeps us going sometimes. Daydreams can overcome a lot of unhappiness. A great escape into your own mind and your place of peace. Thank you for sharing this.

Rita

Re: Daydream (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Friday, 28th May 2004 @ 11:35:01 PM AEST
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I love this its still one of my favorite things to do is swing and its like Im right there captivating write
Michelle

Re: Daydream (User Rating: 1 )
by Whisper on Saturday, 29th May 2004 @ 01:17:53 AM AEST
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Delightfully witty. A good write. Cheery and bright and my heart danced right along with the words.

Whisper

Re: Daydream (User Rating: 1 )
by holderofthestone on Saturday, 29th May 2004 @ 02:15:07 PM AEST
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Another great one! you have a great flow here i really like your work!!

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