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My teardrops and lost fantasies,
All lead to a forsaken doom
I sit upon the windowsill and look up at the sky.
I see your face within the clouds--
--My shattered heart upon the ground
Without a care, I leave it there, before your perfect eyes.
You have died and left me here within the cold shadow of time.
You were an angel in the past,
You are an angel now.
I know that you won't save me--
--Like you have in all my dreams.
If I let go, will you fly down with golden wings and catch me?
I had one love, one hope to guide it.
I had one life, and you helped me survive it.
I have one chance,
I won't let it slip away.
This is my goodbye to you--my hello--
To a lone and forlorn grave.

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Angel

Contributed by skyyblu on Friday, 28th May 2004 @ 08:18:09 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

This is my letter to a world I've never known.
My teardrops and lost fantasies,
All lead to a forsaken doom
I sit upon the windowsill and look up at the sky.
I see your face within the clouds--
--My shattered heart upon the ground
Without a care, I leave it there, before your perfect eyes.
You have died and left me here within the cold shadow of time.
You were an angel in the past,
You are an angel now.
I know that you won't save me--
--Like you have in all my dreams.
If I let go, will you fly down with golden wings and catch me?
I had one love, one hope to guide it.
I had one life, and you helped me survive it.
I have one chance,
I won't let it slip away.
This is my goodbye to you--my hello--
To a lone and forlorn grave.

Copyright © skyyblu ... [ 2004-05-28 20:18:09]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Angel (User Rating: 1 )
by TheVoice on Friday, 28th May 2004 @ 08:59:08 PM AEST
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Very powerful piece of writing. I sincerely hope it is only a write though. In every life there is more to live for than we can ever see. Our vision is so limited to that of Savior. Be strong and ask for help if you need it. Doors that appear closed are always open.

The Voice

Re: Angel (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 29th May 2004 @ 03:46:17 PM AEST
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This is a beautiful write. Only in dreams do angels seem to fly effortlessly, at other times they reach out from behind......a screen???
Hope you are ok....if not pm me,my wings,I mean my door is always open! 0:-)
Angel always...godspeed...joni

Re: Angel (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Saturday, 27th November 2004 @ 09:44:54 PM AEST
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powerful write. a person always has the choice to hold on or let go, lose faith or keep it, make mistakes or succeed. we all have the power to do all these on our own. strength is kept inside of you, you just have to find it.

Re: Angel (User Rating: 1 )
by Katie2008 on Saturday, 27th November 2004 @ 10:01:44 PM AEST
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Powerful and beautiful and sad...I love it. You're very talented.
Katie

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