Welcome to Your Poetry Dot Com - Read, Rate, Comment on, or Submit Poetry. Browse Poetry Forums, or just enjoy other parts of our poetic community.
One of the largest databases of poetry on the net, now over 198,500+ poems!
Welcome to Your Poetry Dot Com    Poems On Site: 198,500+   Comments On Poems: 427,000+   Forum Posts: 105,000+
Custom Search
  Welcome ! Home  ·  FAQ  ·  Topics  ·  Web Links  ·  Your Account  ·  Submit Poetry  ·  Top 30  ·  OldSite Link 29-May 17:19:55 AEST  
  Menu
  Home
· Micks Shop
· Our eBay Store· Error Submit
 Poetry
· Submit Poetry
· Least Read Poems
· Topics
· Members Listing
· Old Site Post 2001
· Old Site Pre 2001
· Poetry Archive
· Public Domain Poetry
 Stories
· Stories (NEW ! )
· Submit Story
· Story Topics
· Stories Archive
· Story Search
  Community
· Our Poetry Forums
· Our Arcade
100's of Games !

  Site Help
· FAQ
· Feedback

  Members Areas
· Your Account
· Members Journals
· Premium Sign-Up
  Premium Section
· Special Section
· Premium Poems
· Premium Submit
· Premium Search
· Premium Top
· Premium Archive
· Premium Topics
 Fun & Games

· Jokes
· Bubble Puzzle
· ConnectN
· Cross Word
· Cross Word Easy
· Drag Puzzle
· Word Hunt
 Reference
· Dictionary
· Dictionary (Rhyming)
· Site Updates
· Content
· Special Content
 Search
· Search
· Web Links
· All Links
 Top
· Top 30
  Help This Site
· Donations
 Others
· Recipes
· Moderators
Our Other Sites
· Embroidery Design Store
· Your Jokes
· Special Urls
· JM Embroideries
· Public Domain Poetry and Stories
· Diamond Dotz
· Cooking Info and Recipes
· Quoof - Australian Story

  Social

Array ( [sid] => 49420 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => More than an Influence [time] => 2004-05-27 23:31:03 [hometext] => A product of being in MADD... [bodytext] => His friends didn’t stop him, he thought it was no big deal
But to me it was my world, as he got behind the wheel
The engine started up, and he put the car in gear
But it was now a weapon that he began to steer

He had only had a few drinks, he thought he would be fine
But between concentration and bad judgment there is a fine line
He drove around a corner, and then took another turn
He had misjudged how sharp it was, but it was too late to learn

He slammed head on into a car when he drifted into the left lane
His life changed forever in a moment of fear and pain
His vehicle flipped over, spun, and landed on its side
The air bag shot out, if not for his seat belt he would have died

He lay unconscious for a while, till he awoke to flashing lights
He could hardly remember what happened, like most nights
Then he realized with horror, that he had crashed
Thankful he was alive, his whole life had suddenly flashed

He asked the paramedic about the other driver
It was a teenage girl, they couldn’t revive her
Tears flowed down his blood streaked face
The consequences he could not erase

Because of a decision he had cost a person their life
The truth echoed in his mind, cut into his heart like a knife
He was now a killer, because he had decided to drive away
While under the influence, now he didn’t know what to say

Because of him, I will never again see her smile
I long to once more hold her hand in mine for awhile
But I can only imagine her life as it was before
Before it was stolen away, and her future torn

No one should have to die so young
Drinking is more serious than just having fun
If you are drunk, find another way to arrive
Friends don’t let friends drink and drive
[comments] => 3 [counter] => 167 [topic] => 39 [informant] => fbijedi [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Grief )
More than an Influence

Contributed by fbijedi on Thursday, 27th May 2004 @ 11:31:03 PM in AEST
Topic: Grief



His friends didn’t stop him, he thought it was no big deal
But to me it was my world, as he got behind the wheel
The engine started up, and he put the car in gear
But it was now a weapon that he began to steer

He had only had a few drinks, he thought he would be fine
But between concentration and bad judgment there is a fine line
He drove around a corner, and then took another turn
He had misjudged how sharp it was, but it was too late to learn

He slammed head on into a car when he drifted into the left lane
His life changed forever in a moment of fear and pain
His vehicle flipped over, spun, and landed on its side
The air bag shot out, if not for his seat belt he would have died

He lay unconscious for a while, till he awoke to flashing lights
He could hardly remember what happened, like most nights
Then he realized with horror, that he had crashed
Thankful he was alive, his whole life had suddenly flashed

He asked the paramedic about the other driver
It was a teenage girl, they couldn’t revive her
Tears flowed down his blood streaked face
The consequences he could not erase

Because of a decision he had cost a person their life
The truth echoed in his mind, cut into his heart like a knife
He was now a killer, because he had decided to drive away
While under the influence, now he didn’t know what to say

Because of him, I will never again see her smile
I long to once more hold her hand in mine for awhile
But I can only imagine her life as it was before
Before it was stolen away, and her future torn

No one should have to die so young
Drinking is more serious than just having fun
If you are drunk, find another way to arrive
Friends don’t let friends drink and drive




Copyright © fbijedi ... [ 2004-05-27 23:31:03]
(Date/Time posted on site)





Advertisments:






Previous Posted Poem         | |         Next Posted Poem


 
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title etc.
Re: More than an Influence (User Rating: 1 )
by Trisha on Thursday, 27th May 2004 @ 11:42:37 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)
To this person who wrote this poem. This is very good. I want you to know I am going to copy this and sent this to all my friends to let them pass this on and keep it going. I want everyone to read this because it has touched my heart. I know people who drink and drive. I told them it could be there mom that they could take away.
I told them it could be a family person or even a friend. I told them I hope it comes back to you and I told them I hope they get busted so they can lose there lisense.


Re: More than an Influence (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Friday, 28th May 2004 @ 05:16:33 AM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)
This poem really struck a chord in me, as I am taking my driving test soin and I going to remember your words when I even think about driving after any amount of drink... I am so sorry for your loss, this was a very sad, raw and emotive poem but written tastefully and very powerful

pixie xx


Re: More than an Influence (User Rating: 1 )
by holderofthestone on Saturday, 29th May 2004 @ 02:33:32 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)
very deep and emotional. this is a truly heartwarming read. sad and yet it expresses what so many people dont want to admit about a situation that puts everyone at risk. You have a great poem here! I enjoyed reading




While every care is taken to ensure the general sites content is family safe, our moderators cannot be in all places; all the time. Please report poetry and or comments that are in breach of our site rules HERE (Please include poem title or url). Parents also please ensure that you supervise your children well when they are on the internet; regardless of what a site says about being, or being considered, child-safe.

Poetry is much like a great photo, a single "moment in time" capturing many feelings and emotions. Yet, they are very alive; creating stirrings within the readers who form visual "pictures" of the expressed emotions within the Poem. ©

Opinions expressed in the poetry, comments, forums etc. on this site are not necessarily those of this site, its owners and/or operators; but of the individuals who post items to this site.
Frequently Asked Questions | | | Privacy Policy | | | Contact Webmaster

All submitted items are Copyright © to their submitter. All the rest Copyright © 2002-2050 by Your Poetry Dot Com

All logos and trademarks in this site are property of their respective owners.

Script Generation Time: 0.052 Seconds. - View our Site Map | .© your-poetry.com