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Array ( [sid] => 49380 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Lies [time] => 2004-05-27 18:55:46 [hometext] => i bloody poem filled with anger, this is an emotional poem, please tell me what you think of it. [bodytext] => Lies,
All bloody horid lies,
How could you do this to me,

I now am a fallen angel,
Let me go,
Fall,

Torture,
How could you lie to me,
I thought we were open with each other,

Do you really still love me,
Or was it a fling,
Never,

Feel,
I need time to heal you say,
Instead you cheat on me with that whore,

That ***** flirt'n with you 24/7,
Dose it all matter anymore,
Cheater,

User,
How could you lie to me,
Then turn around and use me for yourself,

I wasnt angry with you but now I am,
You tore out my heart,
Raped,

Touched,
You raped my feelings,
Just like everyone else had,

Chewed me up and spit me out,
Well now iI think im all used up,
Gone,

Taken,
You took all of whats left of me,
Taken my broken soul and broken life,

Nothin is left of me not a wisp of breath,
Watch me as I die and fade,
Melt,

Expire,
Float away to the sky,
Up to the tips of the trees and then to hell,

To hell where I rot and burn for eternity,
Waiting for you,
Fly,

Away,
Gone forever my soul has taken,
You used me you traitor of human flesh,

To many lies you concived behind my back,
Now there wont be anymore,
Goodbye. [comments] => 1 [counter] => 158 [topic] => 36 [informant] => TwEeK [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )
Lies

Contributed by TwEeK on Thursday, 27th May 2004 @ 06:55:46 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide



Lies,
All bloody horid lies,
How could you do this to me,

I now am a fallen angel,
Let me go,
Fall,

Torture,
How could you lie to me,
I thought we were open with each other,

Do you really still love me,
Or was it a fling,
Never,

Feel,
I need time to heal you say,
Instead you cheat on me with that whore,

That ***** flirt'n with you 24/7,
Dose it all matter anymore,
Cheater,

User,
How could you lie to me,
Then turn around and use me for yourself,

I wasnt angry with you but now I am,
You tore out my heart,
Raped,

Touched,
You raped my feelings,
Just like everyone else had,

Chewed me up and spit me out,
Well now iI think im all used up,
Gone,

Taken,
You took all of whats left of me,
Taken my broken soul and broken life,

Nothin is left of me not a wisp of breath,
Watch me as I die and fade,
Melt,

Expire,
Float away to the sky,
Up to the tips of the trees and then to hell,

To hell where I rot and burn for eternity,
Waiting for you,
Fly,

Away,
Gone forever my soul has taken,
You used me you traitor of human flesh,

To many lies you concived behind my back,
Now there wont be anymore,
Goodbye.




Copyright © TwEeK ... [ 2004-05-27 18:55:46]
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Re: Lies (User Rating: 1 )
by liquidsunshine on Thursday, 27th May 2004 @ 06:57:43 PM AEST
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This poem is just... vivid! I love the poem, however frustrating and angry the emotion behind it may be.
Bravo and encore!
Love,
Chelsea




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