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Array ( [sid] => 49376 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Under the Sea [time] => 2004-05-27 17:39:46 [hometext] => Wishin Fishing... [bodytext] => There once was this Senorita
Who thought that her Life would be Sweeter
If she lived under the Sea.

She called up a friend and they made a plan ..
To get far out to Sea
That's where She wanted to be.

But Left There On Shore were folks she forgot.
Sad but true and needless to say..
They were not pleased on her choice of moves.

But She Didn't Care
She had decided she was going there.
To Swimming and Laugh and be Carefree.
It don't matter if you got No Voice Down There.
There is no one to hear
So no one really cares.

It's the Smiles that you Give
and the Sparkle in your eyes,
That say the Words for you,
so much better then
Here.

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Under the Sea

Contributed by Whisper on Thursday, 27th May 2004 @ 05:39:46 PM in AEST
Topic: ChildrensPoetry

There once was this Senorita
Who thought that her Life would be Sweeter
If she lived under the Sea.

She called up a friend and they made a plan ..
To get far out to Sea
That's where She wanted to be.

But Left There On Shore were folks she forgot.
Sad but true and needless to say..
They were not pleased on her choice of moves.

But She Didn't Care
She had decided she was going there.
To Swimming and Laugh and be Carefree.
It don't matter if you got No Voice Down There.
There is no one to hear
So no one really cares.

It's the Smiles that you Give
and the Sparkle in your eyes,
That say the Words for you,
so much better then
Here.

Whisper

Copyright © Whisper ... [ 2004-05-27 17:39:46]
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Re: Under the Sea (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Thursday, 27th May 2004 @ 06:26:14 PM AEST
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Interesting write, "What happened next"?

Re: Under the Sea (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 27th May 2004 @ 06:52:48 PM AEST
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Probably be just like living here on land. There are land sharks and water sharks. I feel they would be be close in personality. This is a cute write though. It would be nice not to have the daily responsibilities of terrain life.

Rita

Re: Under the Sea (User Rating: 1 )
by mountainhigh on Thursday, 27th May 2004 @ 08:50:33 PM AEST
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Yes I want to go too.......I liked this one too, I read in reverse I loved the other verse.

Thanks for sharing.

Chirs

Re: Under the Sea (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Saturday, 29th May 2004 @ 03:29:04 AM AEST
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beautiful ..well wrapped. venkat

Re: Under the Sea (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 08:38:48 PM AEST
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sounds like shes maybe a mermaid now:) very lovely poem, hugs n' love nessa

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