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Array ( [sid] => 49363 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Frozen [time] => 2004-05-27 16:23:03 [hometext] => This was for my boyfriend when he had some.....issues with his mom. She wouldn't let him talk to me and tried to make him lose all his feelings towards me. Needlessly to say, it didn't worry. [bodytext] => Frozen inside
Without you
Leave me here
How can you
Take the fools
Way out

A witches spell
Cast by an Angel
I try to release
What was never mine
I try to release
The love inside

Frozen inside
Without you
Leave me here
How can you
Take the fools
Way out

Leaving me
I don't get a choice
Coward, Fool!
The love of my life
All describe
The one that was never mine.

Frozen inside
Without you
Leave me here
How can you
Take the fools
Way out

Bound by power
love and soul
You never were
You always are
The one inside me
The one I can never reach

Frozen inside
Without you
Leave me here
How can you
Take the fools
Way out

Saved by Grace
Called by god
Bring back the feelings
Return the life
Bring back the
Love inside! [comments] => 3 [counter] => 166 [topic] => 34 [informant] => Dierna [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SongLyrics )

Frozen

Contributed by Dierna on Thursday, 27th May 2004 @ 04:23:03 PM in AEST
Topic: SongLyrics

Frozen inside
Without you
Leave me here
How can you
Take the fools
Way out

A witches spell
Cast by an Angel
I try to release
What was never mine
I try to release
The love inside

Frozen inside
Without you
Leave me here
How can you
Take the fools
Way out

Leaving me
I don't get a choice
Coward, Fool!
The love of my life
All describe
The one that was never mine.

Frozen inside
Without you
Leave me here
How can you
Take the fools
Way out

Bound by power
love and soul
You never were
You always are
The one inside me
The one I can never reach

Frozen inside
Without you
Leave me here
How can you
Take the fools
Way out

Saved by Grace
Called by god
Bring back the feelings
Return the life
Bring back the
Love inside!

Copyright © Dierna ... [ 2004-05-27 16:23:03]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Frozen (User Rating: 1 )
by Overstated on Thursday, 27th May 2004 @ 04:50:55 PM AEST
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nice heartfelt piece nicely done!!!

Re: Frozen (User Rating: 1 )
by Whisper on Thursday, 27th May 2004 @ 06:10:38 PM AEST
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Nice .I can almost hear those words put to music.

Whisper

Re: Frozen (User Rating: 1 )
by Kusko on Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 07:11:33 PM AEST
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Good
but the spacing of the poem is too broken.
I really like the ideas behind it and the thoughts, but maybe you should try more flowing lines in your poetry.
Right now it sounds like spaztic sobs.
But that's not necessarily a bad thing if that's what you were going for.
~Kusko

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