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Array ( [sid] => 49360 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => ~Haunted Footsteps~ [time] => 2004-05-27 16:09:18 [hometext] => about a dream?ever had a nitemare....try waking up into one....or besides one:P [bodytext] => it haunts the footsteps i walk
it sucks the air i breathe
lurks in the shadows
till dawn
my heart is getting teared in two
like a piece of paper

it hurts so much to dream
i cannot sleep
days are too long
they twist themselves and choke me
im drowding in my own tears
and my heart is weakening

slowly
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~Haunted Footsteps~

Contributed by Hannah_Heaven on Thursday, 27th May 2004 @ 04:09:18 PM in AEST
Topic: DreamsandWishes

it haunts the footsteps i walk
it sucks the air i breathe
lurks in the shadows
till dawn
my heart is getting teared in two
like a piece of paper

it hurts so much to dream
i cannot sleep
days are too long
they twist themselves and choke me
im drowding in my own tears
and my heart is weakening

slowly

Copyright © Hannah_Heaven ... [ 2004-05-27 16:09:18]
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Re: ~Haunted Footsteps~ (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 27th May 2004 @ 06:27:59 PM AEST
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Whilst this is an intriguing read, I would have enjoyed it had you included in the piece, more about your reference about 'waking up beside one', or at least clarifying it a bit more. You have a good idea, and by elaborating more upon it, I feel it would have made this poem stand up and shout a bit louder.

Still, you had me, the reader, interested, and that's a definately a good thing.
Keep writing.

Re: ~Haunted Footsteps~ (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 10:49:43 PM AEST
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i agree with their comment. this is mentally taxing though. i have no idea what is stalking you. it could be anything and i guess that can be some poetic device you used. and the second stanza is excellent.

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