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Array ( [sid] => 49330 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Thank You [time] => 2004-05-27 12:49:24 [hometext] => to and for Luke. [bodytext] => you wonder why i don't look so good
with scattered eyes it's no wonder you would
forget the sight even though you could
sit me down and say your piece...
the tortured soul doesn't move so scattered
as you grab ahold the heart that's battered
what's left to cold doesn't even matter now
you chanced to take a piece of me...

but could you forget the sight
i need to meet with you again
just forget what i look like
we'll think on another way

i'm not more ready than before.
a steady gaze and i'm feeling poor.
there's my insides washed up ashore.
and still you try so violently...
the token item could be in the communication
or so you've said in every reiteration
can't we forget this and take the vacation
is that so hard to see?
stop a minute now.
the grace bin isn't running empty
but in return i have given nothing
i understand you'd like to change me
but skip this thought on me...

so could you forget the sight
i need to meet with you again
just forget what i look like
we'll think on another way
and then there's you the friend
you still point at all the signs
and when my hope seems shattered
you think on another way

and when i think one day i'm going to end
i turn out alright.
and still the posted signs you lead
yes i know i need to.
when the hopeless side of day never ends
it's a stupid sight.
you bring the food to feed.
you bandage when i bleed.

the token item must be in the communication
so could you chance it and tune to my station?
there's a chance i could see things better
i've already made advances far much better
in return i hope to keep returning
at the best i may sound concerning
and life isn't hopeless.
so where the hell should we go?

now could you forget the sight
i need to meet with you again
just forget what i look like
we'll think on another way
and then there's you the friend
you still point at all the signs
and when my hope seems shattered
you think on another way [comments] => 5 [counter] => 232 [topic] => 16 [informant] => remy [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => FriendshipPoetry )
Thank You

Contributed by remy on Thursday, 27th May 2004 @ 12:49:24 PM in AEST
Topic: FriendshipPoetry



you wonder why i don't look so good
with scattered eyes it's no wonder you would
forget the sight even though you could
sit me down and say your piece...
the tortured soul doesn't move so scattered
as you grab ahold the heart that's battered
what's left to cold doesn't even matter now
you chanced to take a piece of me...

but could you forget the sight
i need to meet with you again
just forget what i look like
we'll think on another way

i'm not more ready than before.
a steady gaze and i'm feeling poor.
there's my insides washed up ashore.
and still you try so violently...
the token item could be in the communication
or so you've said in every reiteration
can't we forget this and take the vacation
is that so hard to see?
stop a minute now.
the grace bin isn't running empty
but in return i have given nothing
i understand you'd like to change me
but skip this thought on me...

so could you forget the sight
i need to meet with you again
just forget what i look like
we'll think on another way
and then there's you the friend
you still point at all the signs
and when my hope seems shattered
you think on another way

and when i think one day i'm going to end
i turn out alright.
and still the posted signs you lead
yes i know i need to.
when the hopeless side of day never ends
it's a stupid sight.
you bring the food to feed.
you bandage when i bleed.

the token item must be in the communication
so could you chance it and tune to my station?
there's a chance i could see things better
i've already made advances far much better
in return i hope to keep returning
at the best i may sound concerning
and life isn't hopeless.
so where the hell should we go?

now could you forget the sight
i need to meet with you again
just forget what i look like
we'll think on another way
and then there's you the friend
you still point at all the signs
and when my hope seems shattered
you think on another way




Copyright © remy ... [ 2004-05-27 12:49:24]
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Re: Thank You (User Rating: 1 )
by Daniela_Maria_Violin on Thursday, 27th May 2004 @ 01:11:49 PM AEST
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aww.. this is sweet... such a beautiful write.


Re: Thank You (User Rating: 1 )
by katyqueen35 on Thursday, 27th May 2004 @ 01:14:46 PM AEST
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hmmm nicely written emotional poem.


Re: Thank You (User Rating: 1 )
by JT on Friday, 28th May 2004 @ 02:00:11 AM AEST
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emotional poem. very well written


Re: Thank You (User Rating: 1 )
by carmen_queasy on Friday, 28th May 2004 @ 02:32:07 PM AEST
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that was great :)


Re: Thank You (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 7th July 2004 @ 05:13:13 AM AEST
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Good work. It was a bit long, but I suppose the debt was worth as much.

Keep writing.




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