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No one comes to dig her up theres no where safe to go

She doesnt want to explain she will keep these things inside
No one comes to get rid of the horror that she hides

She has been bruised and battered from the voices in the wind
No one comes to pick her up cause she is just a thing

Maybe if she became another flower and live a thin disguise
No one comes to see the new so whats the point in lies

Her petals are falling off slowly she is withering with pain
No one comes to help her this rose is dying of shame

To weak to even life her head to see if things have changed
No one has done nothing to make this life less strange

Laying in the dirt and stone this wilting rose has died
No one even comes to see to say sorry they never tried [comments] => 4 [counter] => 198 [topic] => 39 [informant] => bleeding_chains [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Grief )

Wilting Rose

Contributed by bleeding_chains on Thursday, 27th May 2004 @ 08:45:04 AM in AEST
Topic: Grief

Shes in the cold again shivering in the snow
No one comes to dig her up theres no where safe to go

She doesnt want to explain she will keep these things inside
No one comes to get rid of the horror that she hides

She has been bruised and battered from the voices in the wind
No one comes to pick her up cause she is just a thing

Maybe if she became another flower and live a thin disguise
No one comes to see the new so whats the point in lies

Her petals are falling off slowly she is withering with pain
No one comes to help her this rose is dying of shame

To weak to even life her head to see if things have changed
No one has done nothing to make this life less strange

Laying in the dirt and stone this wilting rose has died
No one even comes to see to say sorry they never tried

Copyright © bleeding_chains ... [ 2004-05-27 08:45:04]
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Re: Wilting Rose (User Rating: 1 )
by lostinmyself on Thursday, 27th May 2004 @ 08:59:54 AM AEST
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you know what? i think this is the best poem of yours that i have seen. the flow, the words, everything was perfect. so beautiful and sad. great write. phil xxx

Re: Wilting Rose (User Rating: 1 )
by MysticFireFairy on Thursday, 27th May 2004 @ 09:19:40 AM AEST
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awww what a poem...such detail such emotion this is better than any of my poems. I wish i could write like this.

Great job!

Re: Wilting Rose (User Rating: 1 )
by TheReturnOfx7 on Thursday, 27th May 2004 @ 09:35:06 AM AEST
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this is the first poem I've had the pleasure of reading....and its a pleasure I hope to have many times in the future, very awesome

Re: Wilting Rose (User Rating: 1 )
by katyqueen35 on Thursday, 27th May 2004 @ 11:35:45 AM AEST
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Cries" what a beautiful poem.
I love it,

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