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Array ( [sid] => 49274 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Cannot Fall For You Again [time] => 2004-05-26 22:44:57 [hometext] => about trying to not fall for some one, but in the end it is very hard to keep yourself from falling For some one. [bodytext] => our eyes met for a second
i saw you watching me
it astonished me.
and slowly i turned around
i couldnt fall again
i could hardly feel the ground
i knew the pain you left
was healing with a scar
but still i turn and smile.
to cure the pain for a while.
i know that you still watch me
with eyes left green with envy
i know that you still love me
but try to let things be.
for you know you cannot have me
and never will i tell
but slowly i am falling
and soon i'll say i fell.
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Cannot Fall For You Again

Contributed by bttrflynajar on Wednesday, 26th May 2004 @ 10:44:57 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

our eyes met for a second
i saw you watching me
it astonished me.
and slowly i turned around
i couldnt fall again
i could hardly feel the ground
i knew the pain you left
was healing with a scar
but still i turn and smile.
to cure the pain for a while.
i know that you still watch me
with eyes left green with envy
i know that you still love me
but try to let things be.
for you know you cannot have me
and never will i tell
but slowly i am falling
and soon i'll say i fell.

Copyright © bttrflynajar ... [ 2004-05-26 22:44:57]
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Re: Cannot Fall For You Again (User Rating: 1 )
by fbijedi on Wednesday, 26th May 2004 @ 11:24:53 PM AEST
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Awesome poem, really captures the feelings so many have. I love the ending too. Keep them coming!

Re: Cannot Fall For You Again (User Rating: 1 )
by Whisper on Wednesday, 26th May 2004 @ 11:37:32 PM AEST
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nice write

Re: Cannot Fall For You Again (User Rating: 1 )
by Silent-No-More on Thursday, 27th May 2004 @ 12:57:33 AM AEST
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I like this... and think the couple lines below are the essence of why it's so hard! well done

but still i turn and smile.
to cure the pain for a while.

Re: Cannot Fall For You Again (User Rating: 1 )
by Trisha on Thursday, 27th May 2004 @ 10:00:41 PM AEST
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Very Nice Keep Going

Re: Cannot Fall For You Again (User Rating: 1 )
by Whisper on Friday, 28th May 2004 @ 12:36:24 AM AEST
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Ah young hearts. :-) Nice write Kiddo :-)

Whisper

Re: Cannot Fall For You Again (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Sunday, 30th May 2004 @ 10:14:01 PM AEST
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Sweet write..... know the feeling..
Jenni

Re: Cannot Fall For You Again (User Rating: 1 )
by SweetRhythm on Wednesday, 4th August 2004 @ 06:04:09 AM AEST
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That was just nothing less than superbly devine! Im sure a lot of readers can relate to this, how well you captured it all! I loved it. It's beautifully put together. Very enjoyable read. Thanks for sharing it with us all. A definate 5/5.
Corinna

Re: Cannot Fall For You Again (User Rating: 1 )
by silverjade on Saturday, 14th August 2004 @ 11:26:47 PM AEST
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awesome poem , i love the ending its very strong and full of emotion.

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