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Array ( [sid] => 49262 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Intruder Be Warned: Raped and Killed [time] => 2004-05-26 21:34:18 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I can feel your presence
My heart beats rapidly
Trying to run
It's so dark
The moon is my only light
I cannot hide
I feel you watching
I think I'm hidden
But you find me
I was breathing
A rope around my neck
It hurts!
It's to tight!
I can barley breath!
Help me someone!
But I cannot speak
He's dragging me by the rope!
I can't get away
I can barley walk
Thrown on the bed
Hands tied to the bed posts
Clothes ripped off
I'm so weak
I can't fight back
I'm being raped
I can't get away
I'm so sore
He finished doing me
A knife OH NO!
Layed it on the bed I tried to move
To weak to even try
He cut into my stomach
and took out a chunk
The pain was brutal
He started to stab
Twenty times to be exact
I was left to be found
Two days later I was discovered [comments] => 2 [counter] => 144 [topic] => 39 [informant] => pyrofungus [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => Grief )

Intruder Be Warned: Raped and Killed

Contributed by pyrofungus on Wednesday, 26th May 2004 @ 09:34:18 PM in AEST
Topic: Grief

I can feel your presence
My heart beats rapidly
Trying to run
It's so dark
The moon is my only light
I cannot hide
I feel you watching
I think I'm hidden
But you find me
I was breathing
A rope around my neck
It hurts!
It's to tight!
I can barley breath!
Help me someone!
But I cannot speak
He's dragging me by the rope!
I can't get away
I can barley walk
Thrown on the bed
Hands tied to the bed posts
Clothes ripped off
I'm so weak
I can't fight back
I'm being raped
I can't get away
I'm so sore
He finished doing me
A knife OH NO!
Layed it on the bed I tried to move
To weak to even try
He cut into my stomach
and took out a chunk
The pain was brutal
He started to stab
Twenty times to be exact
I was left to be found
Two days later I was discovered

Copyright © pyrofungus ... [ 2004-05-26 21:34:18]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Intruder Be Warned: Raped and Killed (User Rating: 1 )
by reprobate on Wednesday, 26th May 2004 @ 09:47:03 PM AEST
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it is my feeling the title needs to be refined to fit the poem. other than that, i like it. it's macabre enough for a horror show.
thanks for sharing

Re: Intruder Be Warned: Raped and Killed (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Thursday, 27th May 2004 @ 09:57:07 AM AEST
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very powerful words...... such a harsh reality for so many women/men out there.

pixie xx

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