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They know how much I want to be one
so the stories begin on an unwritten page
the ideals and things that become us.

So do you want a blank page
a partition to write on of our escapades?
How we argued and growed;
how good faith was bestowed
and some one else looks on and reads it.

Why should I make things easy
if you know so much about me?
Why can't we struggle
like every other animal in life?
When things are bought
and incur no cost
the value of them are just ice!

So I fill another page in this volume
and another comes wanting more.
He says "Give me your heart
that love may impart
good will and godspeed between us [comments] => 5 [counter] => 205 [topic] => 21 [informant] => Archie [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 14 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems )

The Blank Page

Contributed by Archie on Wednesday, 26th May 2004 @ 08:03:54 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

"The start of a friendship" some one says
They know how much I want to be one
so the stories begin on an unwritten page
the ideals and things that become us.

So do you want a blank page
a partition to write on of our escapades?
How we argued and growed;
how good faith was bestowed
and some one else looks on and reads it.

Why should I make things easy
if you know so much about me?
Why can't we struggle
like every other animal in life?
When things are bought
and incur no cost
the value of them are just ice!

So I fill another page in this volume
and another comes wanting more.
He says "Give me your heart
that love may impart
good will and godspeed between us

Copyright © Archie ... [ 2004-05-26 20:03:54]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: The Blank Page (User Rating: 1 )
by lovingcritters on Thursday, 27th May 2004 @ 12:43:56 AM AEST
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Fantastic start Archie, well written poem.
A friendship so knowing, a friendship to dwell. Good Luck
love
consue

Re: The Blank Page (User Rating: 1 )
by reilt on Thursday, 27th May 2004 @ 09:35:12 AM AEST
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brilliant poem...i just thought it was amazing. thank you for posting it.

Re: The Blank Page (User Rating: 1 )
by Overstated on Thursday, 27th May 2004 @ 04:05:38 PM AEST
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superb mate well done - nice piece!

Re: The Blank Page (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 28th May 2004 @ 02:44:40 AM AEST
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Something to think about on this summer morning, well done very good poetry.

wildejohnny.

Re: The Blank Page (User Rating: 1 )
by bernard on Saturday, 29th May 2004 @ 12:20:07 PM AEST
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Full marks for very good poem. Keep them coming.

bernard.

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