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by myself on the floor
scared and confused
there was no point in life anymore

So i got myself up
Tears streaming down my cheeks
I walked through the house
I had lived in for years months and weeks

I walked to the kitchen
I knew what to do
so I picked up the knife
and through my mind the memories flew

The days at the Beach
The laughs I had shared
The horrible thought
That no one had cared

I looked at myself
the knife pressed to my skin
I couldn't believe
within reach, was the end

But at that same moment
I thought of you
and I lowered my knife
My life wasn't quite through [comments] => 7 [counter] => 297 [topic] => 36 [informant] => AliaAnn15 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 15 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )

Thought of you

Contributed by AliaAnn15 on Wednesday, 26th May 2004 @ 06:39:37 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

Sitting alone
by myself on the floor
scared and confused
there was no point in life anymore

So i got myself up
Tears streaming down my cheeks
I walked through the house
I had lived in for years months and weeks

I walked to the kitchen
I knew what to do
so I picked up the knife
and through my mind the memories flew

The days at the Beach
The laughs I had shared
The horrible thought
That no one had cared

I looked at myself
the knife pressed to my skin
I couldn't believe
within reach, was the end

But at that same moment
I thought of you
and I lowered my knife
My life wasn't quite through

Copyright © AliaAnn15 ... [ 2004-05-26 18:39:37]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Thought of you (User Rating: 1 )
by alwys2nv on Wednesday, 26th May 2004 @ 07:01:56 PM AEST
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this is a GREAT poem, i thought the same way last time i tryed to commit....i loved your poem. keep writting my poet friend...

Re: Thought of you (User Rating: 1 )
by AmaNdAsHepArD on Wednesday, 26th May 2004 @ 07:21:05 PM AEST
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WOW! i loved this poem very dark and descriptive. i like the free verse but at the same time it rhyms and flows smoothly...........great job keep it up
**vamp**

Re: Thought of you (User Rating: 1 )
by thegurl on Wednesday, 26th May 2004 @ 07:23:21 PM AEST
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it should be mandatory for the suicide hotline to read this to all their callers, then maybe someone would not kill themselves.
GREAT write. Keep 'em comin'
the gurl

Re: Thought of you (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 26th May 2004 @ 08:21:53 PM AEST
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hey,i don't know why you were thinking that.there should always be a reason to live cuz life is beautiful,God's gift!i've stopped someone from killing themselves,my best friend,i'm so glad i did,he told me i was the reason he was still here.now think about the pain you would cause to your friends or fam.smile!glad yuo didn't do iT!don't u ever think that again.
love,
andrea

Re: Thought of you (User Rating: 1 )
by bite_me on Thursday, 27th May 2004 @ 04:42:52 AM AEST
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hey ..W o W!

beautifuly written really love your poem, i know that exact feeling!

Ella

xXx

Re: Thought of you (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Thursday, 27th May 2004 @ 09:49:09 AM AEST
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This is a really moving and touching ..... you have done a wonderful job with this.

pixie xx

Re: Thought of you (User Rating: 1 )
by Doriens_Picture on Thursday, 2nd September 2004 @ 06:20:55 PM AEST
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Why do this to my self
When life gets hard to live
And feel so lost and alone
Why is it that it feels so good
When it cuts right to the bone
It hurts so bad sometimes
But its still something
Rather felt than a broken heart
Or the pains of life
When just can’t stand to be me
Hate my self so much sometimes
And feel so ugly inside
I’m an angel with one wing
Who hates him self and life
And can’t deal with his past but
I don’t seek absolution or
Forgiveness for anything

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