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Array ( [sid] => 49241 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Fog [time] => 2004-05-26 18:07:00 [hometext] => This won't make sense to most, but to those few who have been where I am, or who are where I am, this will make tonnes of sense [bodytext] => The fog wrapped tight
Around this beautiful city
Slowly lifts and takes flight
From the force of this site

A smart man once said:
"A day without laughter's like a night without stars"
The horse is no longer being led
I can't see the stars from bed

But as the fog lifts I can enjoy
The world and it's power
All those horrible sites I bann
All those ones made by man

The fog lifts, I see their light
Majestic beauty for all to see
It cuts through this dreary night
I'm gonna make it through this... I might...

Jaime Moran [comments] => 8 [counter] => 201 [topic] => 19 [informant] => yellow_sundragon [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => InspirationalPoems )

Fog

Contributed by yellow_sundragon on Wednesday, 26th May 2004 @ 06:07:00 PM in AEST
Topic: InspirationalPoems

The fog wrapped tight
Around this beautiful city
Slowly lifts and takes flight
From the force of this site

A smart man once said:
"A day without laughter's like a night without stars"
The horse is no longer being led
I can't see the stars from bed

But as the fog lifts I can enjoy
The world and it's power
All those horrible sites I bann
All those ones made by man

The fog lifts, I see their light
Majestic beauty for all to see
It cuts through this dreary night
I'm gonna make it through this... I might...

Jaime Moran

Copyright © yellow_sundragon ... [ 2004-05-26 18:07:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Fog (User Rating: 1 )
by Fionndruinne on Wednesday, 26th May 2004 @ 06:14:53 PM AEST
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Excellent metaphor, with the fog. I live in rainy coastal Oregon, so I see a lot of mist. It has always enchanted me, so it makes this piece the more compelling...
Well done!
Andrew

Re: Fog (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Wednesday, 26th May 2004 @ 06:23:38 PM AEST
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beautiful poem. I am glad you are able to see the sun after your depression has lifted if that is indeed what its about. I liked the mood of this poem 'twas great.

Bobo (Joel)

Re: Fog (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Wednesday, 26th May 2004 @ 06:35:09 PM AEST
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yes I do understand this but my fog is still thick Im looking for something beyond that fog though well done!
Michelle

Re: Fog (User Rating: 1 )
by purplestary on Wednesday, 26th May 2004 @ 06:36:26 PM AEST
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great write. i have been where you are. congradulations on getting through the "fog". it's tough to do but once it's done it's worth the fight.

Re: Fog (User Rating: 1 )
by secretwind on Wednesday, 26th May 2004 @ 07:19:06 PM AEST
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"The horse is no longer being led." that says it all when the fog lifts...good write.

Re: Fog (User Rating: 1 )
by lovingcritters on Thursday, 27th May 2004 @ 02:01:49 AM AEST
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Not much fog in the mountains of Wyoming, but I've been in fogs in Washington state where you couldn't see your hands infront of you.
I loved your poem......it was very interesting, and painted beautiful pictures in my time.
love
consue

Re: Fog (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 07:49:22 AM AEST
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Excellent write from the master, once more. Sometimes you make me soooo jealous *sniffles* lol. Love ya really, this is beautiful.

Your sis
- Becca

Re: Fog (User Rating: 1 )
by MoonlitAngel on Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 09:21:44 PM AEST
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this is so pretty.... love the last line!!!

Dee

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