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Array ( [sid] => 49213 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Messages [time] => 2004-05-26 14:10:00 [hometext] => Comments Are Appreciated Thanks. [bodytext] => I walked along a path one day
for a while and home seemed so far away.
I passed along an orchard white,
looking lovingly at it with delight.
And the birds chirping messages we may never understand,
As they passed over a feather fell onto my hand.
The oak trees standing proud and tall,
O, can't we just not have Fall?
And all the rivers and streams glistening in the light,
And everything seems so perfect, just right.
And I touched the tufts of flowers with my hand,
While the birds chirped messages we may never understand. [comments] => 5 [counter] => 156 [topic] => 27 [informant] => TheNextRobertFrost [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 13 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => NaturePoetry )

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Contributed by TheNextRobertFrost on Wednesday, 26th May 2004 @ 02:10:00 PM in AEST
Topic: NaturePoetry

I walked along a path one day
for a while and home seemed so far away.
I passed along an orchard white,
looking lovingly at it with delight.
And the birds chirping messages we may never understand,
As they passed over a feather fell onto my hand.
The oak trees standing proud and tall,
O, can't we just not have Fall?
And all the rivers and streams glistening in the light,
And everything seems so perfect, just right.
And I touched the tufts of flowers with my hand,
While the birds chirped messages we may never understand.

Copyright © TheNextRobertFrost ... [ 2004-05-26 14:10:00]
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Re: Messages (User Rating: 1 )
by apollo on Wednesday, 26th May 2004 @ 02:35:01 PM AEST
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sweet. i love the flow to this. we may never truly understand the chirping of a bird but it is so melodic isnt it? wonderful write

Re: Messages (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 26th May 2004 @ 03:31:06 PM AEST
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Short and sweet!You have big shoes to fill with Robert Frost! He is one of a kind. We all want to be or soon want to be Robert Frost! lol
Keep writing and feel the rhythm, it's what makes poems come alive!
Nice work!
Angel always...godspeed...joni

Re: Messages (User Rating: 1 )
by Whisper on Wednesday, 26th May 2004 @ 11:57:25 PM AEST
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Hmmm you seemed to have captured a moment. Seems to me you -you understood their message.

Re: Messages (User Rating: 1 )
by freespirit on Thursday, 27th May 2004 @ 03:35:59 AM AEST
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I love the way you write you have been given a gift I enjoy reading your work keep up the good work

Re: Messages (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Friday, 28th January 2005 @ 10:51:29 PM AEST
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wow now this is an awesome write.
Every time I see a red cardinal it reminds me of my mom. yesturday I saw both male-n-female and that reminded me of both my parents as they r both my guardian angels,
Keep up the awesome writing.
huggs,
emy

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