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Array ( [sid] => 49177 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => See Right Through Me [time] => 2004-05-26 04:50:38 [hometext] => I'm glad you see right through me Diana. You always know how I feel, and I'll keep wearing my hurt until we're back together, or I learn to deal with it. [bodytext] => I’m smiling on the outside
Yet dying on the inside
Does anybody see this?
I bet you’d See Right Through Me.

I come off, as I’m OK
But deep inside I’m aching
Can I keep this to myself?
I know you’d See Right Through Me.

I walk among new people
But they will never know
The burdens that I carry
Of course you’d See Right Through Me.

If I could See Right Through Me
Then I could fake the pain
And have you back in my life
But you already See Right Through Me. [comments] => 5 [counter] => 176 [topic] => 22 [informant] => Joker17 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )
See Right Through Me

Contributed by Joker17 on Wednesday, 26th May 2004 @ 04:50:38 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove



I’m smiling on the outside
Yet dying on the inside
Does anybody see this?
I bet you’d See Right Through Me.

I come off, as I’m OK
But deep inside I’m aching
Can I keep this to myself?
I know you’d See Right Through Me.

I walk among new people
But they will never know
The burdens that I carry
Of course you’d See Right Through Me.

If I could See Right Through Me
Then I could fake the pain
And have you back in my life
But you already See Right Through Me.




Copyright © Joker17 ... [ 2004-05-26 04:50:38]
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Re: See Right Through Me (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Wednesday, 26th May 2004 @ 05:16:15 AM AEST
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Sorry to hear that you're hurting at the moment, maybe your poetry will help you deal with losing your love,
good poem,

pixie xx


Re: See Right Through Me (User Rating: 1 )
by brigitte7735 on Wednesday, 26th May 2004 @ 02:21:50 PM AEST
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I love your persistence. Good luck with her.

Vanessa


Re: See Right Through Me (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Wednesday, 26th May 2004 @ 03:41:34 PM AEST
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when we are no longer loved by the one we love, this feeling is so true, very sad poem, hugs n' love nessa

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Re: See Right Through Me (User Rating: 1 )
by Rosy on Wednesday, 26th May 2004 @ 10:52:58 PM AEST
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i noticed ur username cuz my fiance calls himself joker...he's an aspiring rapper...hes away right now and not for the best of reasons..neway, me n him have been through some crap n were broken up for a long time, something i learned is never lose hope if you really love someone, seriously...i know this probably falls on deaf ears and you are saying to yourself...never...but i've been there so i guess what i am getting at is believe in love, or believe that i believe enough for the two of us
*luv* --rosie


Re: See Right Through Me (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Wednesday, 26th May 2004 @ 11:04:46 PM AEST
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The bluntness of this brought tears to my eyes. I am going through something like this with a girl right now myself thnx for posting this it makes me know i am not alone. Great poem.

bobo (Joel)




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