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Array ( [sid] => 4915 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => B**** [time] => 2002-10-11 07:30:00 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I'm so scared of what I may do
I mean it's all your fault
It was down to you
You could of resisted
you could of said no
but you kissed him
you ***** you cant let go
leave the others alone
they we're the old
I am the new
my life My body My love
I gave it all to you
you tore it up
threw it in my face
told me you could never love me
& that I'm a disgrace to the human race
I cant beleive it
you ***** whore
I gave you roses
as i came thorugh your door
yet again i saw him with you
naked on the floor,
I close It quietly,
Walk over
as you do not see
Pick up an ornement
raise it above my head
and. . .
He's dead. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 266 [topic] => 39 [informant] => witwooo [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Grief )

B****

Contributed by witwooo on Friday, 11th October 2002 @ 07:30:00 AM in AEST
Topic: Grief

I'm so scared of what I may do
I mean it's all your fault
It was down to you
You could of resisted
you could of said no
but you kissed him
you ***** you cant let go
leave the others alone
they we're the old
I am the new
my life My body My love
I gave it all to you
you tore it up
threw it in my face
told me you could never love me
& that I'm a disgrace to the human race
I cant beleive it
you ***** whore
I gave you roses
as i came thorugh your door
yet again i saw him with you
naked on the floor,
I close It quietly,
Walk over
as you do not see
Pick up an ornement
raise it above my head
and. . .
He's dead.

Copyright © witwooo ... [ 2002-10-11 07:30:00]
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Re: B**** (User Rating: 1 )
by Phildel on Friday, 11th October 2002 @ 07:35:34 AM AEST
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Intense piece of work you have here, a stimulating write,
Thanks for the read and if it's autobiographical...well, she was way out of the line, although i'm counting on the last bit being made up..

Phildel xx

Re: B**** (User Rating: 1 )
by witwooo on Friday, 18th October 2002 @ 05:01:13 AM AEST
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Not just the last bit I exagerated on the naked part too they we're just kissing.

Re: B**** (User Rating: 1 )
by Hiddendarkness1705 on Saturday, 26th July 2003 @ 05:53:01 PM AEST
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Intense and very well written.
~Stacie~

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