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[title] => Living in a rather thankful cactus
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[hometext] => As you already know, purpose is a keyboard drifting from my hangnail
[bodytext] => Unfortunately, the past & future is a peripatetic labyrinth that is only irrelevant. This is the very thing that sequesters us from the fruitfulness being that we all once were. Being provident will not allow you to be ignorant of provincial propensity. Obviously we all must have scrutinized the secular beings. It is a choice we all face sometime in our lives, to choose to believe in God. There is no categorical evidence that he/she/it existed. Yet there is no proof that he didn't. But if one is secular, he will have no guidelines, rules, discipline, obedience, and he will only realize his mistake. So focusing your thoughts on what’s ahead and behind will only notify your complacent or magnify you insecureness. To be neutral is the bastion of commensurate, vitriolic and incandescent life.
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Living in a rather thankful cactus
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Scraper
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Tuesday, 25th May 2004 @ 09:53:40 PM in AEST
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Unfortunately, the past & future is a peripatetic labyrinth that is only irrelevant. This is the very thing that sequesters us from the fruitfulness being that we all once were. Being provident will not allow you to be ignorant of provincial propensity. Obviously we all must have scrutinized the secular beings. It is a choice we all face sometime in our lives, to choose to believe in God. There is no categorical evidence that he/she/it existed. Yet there is no proof that he didn't. But if one is secular, he will have no guidelines, rules, discipline, obedience, and he will only realize his mistake. So focusing your thoughts on what’s ahead and behind will only notify your complacent or magnify you insecureness. To be neutral is the bastion of commensurate, vitriolic and incandescent life.
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Re: Living in a rather thankful cactus
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by Cole on
Friday, 18th June 2004 @ 06:23:07 PM AEST
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This isn't really poetry. It's deep with well-formed thoughts, but that's it. It's thoughts written in suceeding lines that look like poetry, but it's not. I'm sure you could rethink this and create a great poem, though.
-Kholie-
P.S. - I'd appreciate it if you'd return the favor of critiquing one poem. |
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Re: Living in a rather thankful cactus
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by Essentially9 on
Friday, 18th June 2004 @ 11:56:03 PM AEST
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| very interesting. a lot of philosophy to contemplate. |
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