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I see everything in sight.
Fields of ice, drifting snow,
No one plays and keeps their soul.
Come to me. Trust my lies.
Believe my words and not your eyes.
I will twist, your poor soul.
Draining you’s my final goal.

Take the gun. Spin the wheel.
Eventually to me you’ll kneel.
I am bliss. I am pain.
I will bathe you in my reign.
Shards of glass. Splintered steel.
Far to late to see I’m real.
Gone to far. Slipping down.
You’ve broken through and now you’ll drown.

Cry for help. Beg and plead.
Only I have what you need.
Try to run. Try to hide.
I’m the thorn that’s in your side.
Road you choose. Bloodied stone.
You find yourself in the end alone.
Icy hands, steal your eyes.
A perfect end, addicts demise.

Michael David Morash
Copyright © 1996

From my book
Stray Toughts From A Wandering Mind [comments] => 4 [counter] => 260 [topic] => 66 [informant] => mdmorash [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 14 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => drugabuse )

Fields of Ice (Addicts Demise)

Contributed by mdmorash on Tuesday, 25th May 2004 @ 08:58:12 PM in AEST
Topic: drugabuse

I see dark. I see light.
I see everything in sight.
Fields of ice, drifting snow,
No one plays and keeps their soul.
Come to me. Trust my lies.
Believe my words and not your eyes.
I will twist, your poor soul.
Draining you’s my final goal.

Take the gun. Spin the wheel.
Eventually to me you’ll kneel.
I am bliss. I am pain.
I will bathe you in my reign.
Shards of glass. Splintered steel.
Far to late to see I’m real.
Gone to far. Slipping down.
You’ve broken through and now you’ll drown.

Cry for help. Beg and plead.
Only I have what you need.
Try to run. Try to hide.
I’m the thorn that’s in your side.
Road you choose. Bloodied stone.
You find yourself in the end alone.
Icy hands, steal your eyes.
A perfect end, addicts demise.

Michael David Morash
Copyright © 1996

From my book
Stray Toughts From A Wandering Mind

Copyright Â© mdmorash ... [ 2004-05-25 20:58:12]
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Re: Fields of Ice (Addicts Demise) (User Rating: 1 )
by Saitou-sama on Tuesday, 25th May 2004 @ 09:04:34 PM AEST
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Ooh, I got chills just reading it. This is one of my favorites. The rhyming pattern was absolutely wonderful and there was great rhythm. I'm impressed.

Re: Fields of Ice (Addicts Demise) (User Rating: 1 )
by thumper on Tuesday, 25th May 2004 @ 09:17:26 PM AEST
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This is absolutely fantastic! Gripping read from beginning to end! I hope I don't EVER get this hooked on anything! You know you're stuff.Thumps ; 0 )

Re: Fields of Ice (Addicts Demise) (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 1st June 2004 @ 05:57:49 AM AEST
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Excellent R&R again, replete with a powerful theme. I can totally relate. Thoroughly enjoyable read.

Re: Fields of Ice (Addicts Demise) (User Rating: 1 )
by elegeia on Wednesday, 2nd June 2004 @ 09:58:55 AM AEST
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especially if one particular could it would surely go like this...

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