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I Won't Let Go
Contributed by
Joker17
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Tuesday, 25th May 2004 @ 08:22:39 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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You said we’re just done talking
With one more hug goodbye
Then one last kiss, I drove off
To hide the tears I’d cry.
Didn’t even make the stop sign
I tried, but I couldn’t see
Wet salt escaping red eyes
I’ve lost the best of me.
For weeks, kept trying everything
To make you change your mind
But it was growing crystal clear
Lost chances can’t rewind.
I tried my best to say to you
I’m the one who should be blamed
Now it’s too late, we’re all alone
My fault, I’m so ashamed.
So if we’re just through talking
Then please just tell me this
Why did you write back to me?
To make me reminisce?
I did not need reminding
The pain my heart is in
If we just keep on talking
Hurt might get worse again.
Don’t get me wrong, I love it
Don’t know where it may lead
I thought I had to move on
Still regretting all I need.
Is that a sign to show me
How much you love me too?
That maybe we’re not over
And you miss me that much too?
Don’t know again what’s coming
I thought we had to end
I tried to make the best of it
Don’t want you to pretend.
We have to find the answer
I know you’re trying too
Either we will make it work
I guess it’s up to you.
‘Cause I just can’t keep trying
It has to be your call
My head has been exploding
And beaten on the wall.
If your mind may be changing
And you think there’s a chance
You know just where to find me
I’d take back our romance.
I’m ready, and I’ve found me
So you just let me know
If you may want me back again
This time I Won’t Let Go.
Copyright ©
Joker17
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2004-05-25 20:22:39]
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Re: I Won't Let Go
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 25th May 2004 @ 08:51:03 PM AEST
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Sad write but written well.
luv, huggs,
emy |
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Re: I Won't Let Go
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by katyqueen35 on
Tuesday, 25th May 2004 @ 10:50:34 PM AEST
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Yes i agree that is very sad.
best of luck.good write. |
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Re: I Won't Let Go
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by Fionndruinne on
Sunday, 30th May 2004 @ 12:30:36 AM AEST
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Very movingly portrayed.
But it was growing crystal clear
Lost chances can’t rewind.
I especially like those lines. very poetically done!
Andrew |
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