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To play under the old oak tree
I think they were mocking me

They nuzzled close to each other
As long time lovers will do
Reminding me to miss you

They stayed for too short a time
Then fluttered off into the sky
They never even told me why

Crows, fat and black, come then
Staring through me with evil eyes
They tell me of your lies

I try to scare the vile beasts away
Those nasty birds refuse to go
Anger now begins to grow

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Doves and Crows

Contributed by Silent-No-More on Tuesday, 25th May 2004 @ 08:21:38 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Two morning doves came today
To play under the old oak tree
I think they were mocking me

They nuzzled close to each other
As long time lovers will do
Reminding me to miss you

They stayed for too short a time
Then fluttered off into the sky
They never even told me why

Crows, fat and black, come then
Staring through me with evil eyes
They tell me of your lies

I try to scare the vile beasts away
Those nasty birds refuse to go
Anger now begins to grow

Copyright © Silent-No-More ... [ 2004-05-25 20:21:38]
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Re: Doves and Crows (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Tuesday, 25th May 2004 @ 08:52:56 PM AEST
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awww! this is such a strong poem, full of feelings, beautifully written, i love it:) hugs n' love nessa

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Re: Doves and Crows (User Rating: 1 )
by Stitch on Tuesday, 25th May 2004 @ 09:06:07 PM AEST
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Excellent. Great way to work through things. Love the symbolism. I am familiar with this. We remember the good things and almost forget our reasons for moving on. Nice write.
Stitch

Re: Doves and Crows (User Rating: 1 )
by holderofthestone on Wednesday, 2nd June 2004 @ 12:19:24 AM AEST
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I cant believe I hadnt read this yet...great emotion.

Re: Doves and Crows (User Rating: 1 )
by Cole on Friday, 18th June 2004 @ 08:54:50 PM AEST
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Nice. Very symbolic. The rhymes didn't distract the reader from the poem either. That's something many writers have difficulty with.

-Kholie-

P.S. - Thanks for commenting on a couple of my poems.

Re: Doves and Crows (User Rating: 1 )
by Rakerman1999 on Friday, 18th June 2004 @ 09:01:53 PM AEST
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The title of this caught my eye and I'm glad it did.
Don't let the anger consume you my friend.

Very well written

Larry

Re: Doves and Crows (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 4th May 2006 @ 03:04:45 AM AEST
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I know I'm repeating myself when I say you have a way of magically making the words fall onto the page in such an exquisite way. I can relate to this poem so much, however, you tell the story of the emotion...those type feelings in brilliant form. Saying I am very impressed seems to be an understatement but that's all I have at the moment. Very very impressed.

Thank you,

Timber

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