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Array ( [sid] => 49090 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Lost [time] => 2004-05-25 17:43:21 [hometext] => A old poem of mine that I just stumbled across. Comments appreciated. Thank you* [bodytext] => Remainders
Reminders.
Dust settles
Between the cracks
And all about.
The day becomes a dream
Lost in hope
And losing it still.
The distance has
Forced itself between.
Drowning thoughts in tears
Lacing memories with salt.
Inflicting a fierce and ugly pain
Upon an empty, failing heart.
Each breath drawn
Airs itself in misery.
The passing and mourning thereof
Becomes larger than the life
given to.
And all that's left is so
To wallow
As the day closes in
Upon the passing of
All so badly wanted
But now vanished, gone
And lost. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 187 [topic] => 32 [informant] => reilt [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )

Lost

Contributed by reilt on Tuesday, 25th May 2004 @ 05:43:21 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

Remainders
Reminders.
Dust settles
Between the cracks
And all about.
The day becomes a dream
Lost in hope
And losing it still.
The distance has
Forced itself between.
Drowning thoughts in tears
Lacing memories with salt.
Inflicting a fierce and ugly pain
Upon an empty, failing heart.
Each breath drawn
Airs itself in misery.
The passing and mourning thereof
Becomes larger than the life
given to.
And all that's left is so
To wallow
As the day closes in
Upon the passing of
All so badly wanted
But now vanished, gone
And lost.

Copyright © reilt ... [ 2004-05-25 17:43:21]
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Re: Lost (User Rating: 1 )
by bernard on Wednesday, 26th May 2004 @ 10:45:52 AM AEST
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A lost love is a terrible feeling to have to endure. Try to keep smiling.

bernard

Re: Lost (User Rating: 1 )
by Stitch on Wednesday, 26th May 2004 @ 11:11:50 AM AEST
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Such sadness. I feel that today. Isn't it amazing how things can build so slowly and vanish so quickly. Life lessons. A very sorrowful and telling write.
Stitch

Re: Lost (User Rating: 1 )
by Overstated on Wednesday, 26th May 2004 @ 04:45:45 PM AEST
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can really feel the sorrow - superb write!

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