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You think its corny; You think its a game
But I enjoy it, and it'll remaine the same
Not gifted with a pen, so you hate on me
Well get a life, and get away from me
Do your thing, and I'll do mine
Throw me your diss, and I'll hand you a dime
That's all your words are worth in my eyes
What? Did you want some kind of prize?
Well here's a gift from me to you
Get a brain and get a clue
You're a nothing and always have been
Just an animal, lost from its pen
Learn to read or learn to write
Before you diss and start a fight
Call my words shallow because you don't know what they mean
You're just a kid pretending to be a teen
You have no reason to talk your trash
Your words are fragile; Mine are considered cash
Now it's my turn to diss, but I think I'll pass
Because you're not worth it; You won't ever last [comments] => 6 [counter] => 243 [topic] => 6 [informant] => ChristopherFriedrich [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 11 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => AngryPoetry )
Thoughtless Thinking

Contributed by ChristopherFriedrich on Thursday, 10th October 2002 @ 11:30:00 PM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry



"Thoughtless Thinking"
You think its corny; You think its a game
But I enjoy it, and it'll remaine the same
Not gifted with a pen, so you hate on me
Well get a life, and get away from me
Do your thing, and I'll do mine
Throw me your diss, and I'll hand you a dime
That's all your words are worth in my eyes
What? Did you want some kind of prize?
Well here's a gift from me to you
Get a brain and get a clue
You're a nothing and always have been
Just an animal, lost from its pen
Learn to read or learn to write
Before you diss and start a fight
Call my words shallow because you don't know what they mean
You're just a kid pretending to be a teen
You have no reason to talk your trash
Your words are fragile; Mine are considered cash
Now it's my turn to diss, but I think I'll pass
Because you're not worth it; You won't ever last




Copyright © ChristopherFriedrich ... [ 2002-10-10 23:30:00]
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Re: Thoughtless Thinking (User Rating: 1 )
by LOWMAN613 on Friday, 11th October 2002 @ 12:10:40 AM AEST
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Wow who are you angry at? another great read!
Were all poets just trying to succeed!


Re: Thoughtless Thinking (User Rating: 1 )
by Lia on Friday, 11th October 2002 @ 02:24:08 AM AEST
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Very Well put!!!


Re: Thoughtless Thinking (User Rating: 1 )
by aernby on Friday, 11th October 2002 @ 04:39:06 AM AEST
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nice job -- there is a rap feeling ti it -- is that intentional?


Re: Thoughtless Thinking (User Rating: 1 )
by ChristopherFriedrich on Friday, 11th October 2002 @ 06:26:21 AM AEST
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Not really, I hate rap.


Re: Thoughtless Thinking (User Rating: 1 )
by Mystery_Girl on Friday, 11th October 2002 @ 08:29:25 AM AEST
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Yeah good write here and u tell them...And i hope a certain peron reads this that loves to give smart comments around here of late....take care ....Tanya......:-)


Re: Thoughtless Thinking (User Rating: 1 )
by sughy on Thursday, 24th October 2002 @ 06:01:39 AM AEST
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You make a very valid point! So many people make fun of me because I'm on the football team and I write poetry. They say that the two dont "intertwine." But I don't listen to them, I keep doing my thing, while they keep doing there's. Very Good Poem! (You recieved a 4 from me)




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