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Array ( [sid] => 49088 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The unseen one [time] => 2004-05-25 17:12:54 [hometext] => The one hiddin beneath us. The one who tells us too make the decision of no return. Please comment :) [bodytext] => All who live the day
Know of the unseen one
He prowls the days
He prowls the night
In search of a new one
To pray upon

Unable too see
Unable too punch
He strips your life
With one swift slash

With a straight head
And a spirit of gold
You can overcome
The unseen one

For he makes you think
That there's nothing in life
But for there for all
For we wont fall

We were ment too persue
Not too fall
For too take the easy way out
Is what he wants

Its not death
For many do think
But yourself as one
For you have two sides
Not the one of hope
The one of no life
The one of no hope
The one I call
The unseen one [comments] => 2 [counter] => 144 [topic] => 48 [informant] => heartfilledblood [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 7 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

The unseen one

Contributed by heartfilledblood on Tuesday, 25th May 2004 @ 05:12:54 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

All who live the day
Know of the unseen one
He prowls the days
He prowls the night
In search of a new one
To pray upon

Unable too see
Unable too punch
He strips your life
With one swift slash

With a straight head
And a spirit of gold
You can overcome
The unseen one

For he makes you think
That there's nothing in life
But for there for all
For we wont fall

We were ment too persue
Not too fall
For too take the easy way out
Is what he wants

Its not death
For many do think
But yourself as one
For you have two sides
Not the one of hope
The one of no life
The one of no hope
The one I call
The unseen one

Copyright © heartfilledblood ... [ 2004-05-25 17:12:54]
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Re: The unseen one (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Tuesday, 25th May 2004 @ 05:21:17 PM AEST
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This is a good poem, the line "But for there for all" makes no sense to me. Can you explain it so that I can understand your poem better?

Re: The unseen one (User Rating: 1 )
by Fionndruinne on Wednesday, 26th May 2004 @ 01:24:27 AM AEST
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Excellent piece! You seem to be a fellow warrior of the light. I like this one.
A few spelling errors, though. 'too' should be 'to' in the places it appears here. 'too' is only used for 'also' and in comparing ("too much"). But well done anyway. I'm just a fanatic when it comes to spelling. Keep up the good work!
Andrew

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