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Array ( [sid] => 49038 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Daydreams [time] => 2004-05-25 10:39:07 [hometext] => An escape from the dull school life. [bodytext] => Head in my palm,
Leaning on my elbow,
My eyes flutter shut,
As my imagination grows.

The beach, the sun,
The books, the friends,
The rain, the fun,
The games, the trends.

I travel through time
A smile on my face
A world full of bliss
I'm lost in that place.

Oops, oh no...
Daydreaming again,
I'm called on and shout,
"Um...the answer is 10?" [comments] => 7 [counter] => 244 [topic] => 67 [informant] => eatfresh22 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 14 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => schoolproblems )

Daydreams

Contributed by eatfresh22 on Tuesday, 25th May 2004 @ 10:39:07 AM in AEST
Topic: schoolproblems

Head in my palm,
Leaning on my elbow,
My eyes flutter shut,
As my imagination grows.

The beach, the sun,
The books, the friends,
The rain, the fun,
The games, the trends.

I travel through time
A smile on my face
A world full of bliss
I'm lost in that place.

Oops, oh no...
Daydreaming again,
I'm called on and shout,
"Um...the answer is 10?"

Copyright © eatfresh22 ... [ 2004-05-25 10:39:07]
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Re: Daydreams (User Rating: 1 )
by Fionndruinne on Tuesday, 25th May 2004 @ 07:13:27 PM AEST
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Delightful ending! Good rhythm and rhyme here. Quite nice, meldenya.

Andrew

Re: Daydreams (User Rating: 1 )
by JT on Wednesday, 26th May 2004 @ 02:09:39 AM AEST
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great write. flows well. I can relate, a bit of a dreamer myself.
-jt-

Re: Daydreams (User Rating: 1 )
by Wachumiri on Wednesday, 26th May 2004 @ 03:46:31 AM AEST
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Ever read 'Calvin and Hobbs'? You can probably relate. I know I can.
Take care, Carrie.
David

Re: Daydreams (User Rating: 1 )
by liquidsunshine on Thursday, 27th May 2004 @ 04:07:57 PM AEST
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HAHA! I love daydreaming in class! This is a GREAT poem... its so truthful and blatant. I can really feel the thoughts flowing through this one. Man, what a great one this is!
Bravo and encore!
Love,
Chelsea

Re: Daydreams (User Rating: 1 )
by buchi on Monday, 5th July 2004 @ 12:39:36 PM AEST
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Well done daydreamer...

Re: Daydreams (User Rating: 1 )
by faith_my_eyes on Monday, 5th July 2004 @ 11:36:18 PM AEST
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LOL! excellent poem... haven't most of us been there at one time?
God's Blessings,
Em

Re: Daydreams (User Rating: 1 )
by Seans_Girl on Saturday, 17th July 2004 @ 01:34:04 AM AEST
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haha. I know exactly what you mean! I did that all the time except they never called on me. Thank god.
~Natalie~

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