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I cannot fill my hunger with the sins I swallow
I have so much anger, but I’m so empty inside
I cannot fill this void with lust and lies
I try and try but still I fail
an invisible succubus, my own gateway to hell
as my spirit builds with madness, there’s this hole in my soul
it cannot be healed with warm words cause inside its oh so cold
an infinity of negativity, that’s consuming my mind
I add so much fuel to my fire and I’m running out of time
soon this black hole will engulf my very being
then I will fill it with others blood, rampant chaos is what I’m seeing
the blanket of darkness is covering my eyes
letting me see the things that will soon arise
I know I’m going crazy so of course I’m not insane
I know the madness that is soon to follow, to fill the pit I’ve made
if love could fill the void, that would be divine
but yet....I’m still so empty inside
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Empty

Contributed by Vermillion on Tuesday, 25th May 2004 @ 05:36:37 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

I’m full of rage but yet I’m so hollow
I cannot fill my hunger with the sins I swallow
I have so much anger, but I’m so empty inside
I cannot fill this void with lust and lies
I try and try but still I fail
an invisible succubus, my own gateway to hell
as my spirit builds with madness, there’s this hole in my soul
it cannot be healed with warm words cause inside its oh so cold
an infinity of negativity, that’s consuming my mind
I add so much fuel to my fire and I’m running out of time
soon this black hole will engulf my very being
then I will fill it with others blood, rampant chaos is what I’m seeing
the blanket of darkness is covering my eyes
letting me see the things that will soon arise
I know I’m going crazy so of course I’m not insane
I know the madness that is soon to follow, to fill the pit I’ve made
if love could fill the void, that would be divine
but yet....I’m still so empty inside

Copyright Â© Vermillion ... [ 2004-05-25 05:36:37]
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Re: Empty (User Rating: 1 )
by Another_Dimension on Tuesday, 25th May 2004 @ 06:25:46 AM AEST
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Funny you should ask, im about to submit a poem, has something to do with holes in souls. nice poem, could be better but still good. 3/5 x

Re: Empty (User Rating: 1 )
by kidpoet_213 on Tuesday, 25th May 2004 @ 10:37:49 AM AEST
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I think its an excellent poem... yeah it could be tweeked here and there... but what poem doesn't need tweeking... all in all this poem was a joy for me to read...
I think we all have holes in our souls... some maybe so tiny that they're invisible and yet others so gaping that they will never heal...
U did a fine job... keep writing...
~Donna~

Re: Empty (User Rating: 1 )
by brigitte7735 on Tuesday, 25th May 2004 @ 04:24:02 PM AEST
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I totally relate to this....

I love the part about " i know i'm going crazy so of course im not insane"

on a side note, i seriously love it when i get to read a new poem of yours, highlight of the lunch break.

I took to reading Jigsaw Child to my sister

Vanessa

Re: Empty (User Rating: 1 )
by xXxFaygoFetishxXx on Sunday, 20th June 2004 @ 02:24:59 AM AEST
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I've felt that way before.
And it truely sucks!
Your a great writer, and I look forward to reading more of your poems.
::Elizabeth::

Re: Empty (User Rating: 1 )
by assassinatorgirl on Tuesday, 29th November 2005 @ 06:26:03 PM AEST
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keep looking for the love that can really fill it. love for yourself is also necessary. very insightful poem, good job.

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