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Then I praise the nature for her goodness
I can see the tree leaves turning green like grass
I can see the flowers with bright colours
I can see the barren land gets wet with water

When I walk in the rain
Then I hear the roaring sound of thunder and lightening
I can see all birds on the trees sit quietly
I can see no animals on the road walking
I can see all the ponds gets filled with rain water

When I walk in the rain
Then I listen the wind whistling like a melody
I can see all the trees dance to the tune of wind
I can see the rain water rushes down to the stream violently
I can see all the farmers are happy with their gain.

Ravi Sathasivam / Sri Lanka

Copyright ©2004 Ravi Sathasivam
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When I walk in the rain......

Contributed by ravisada on Tuesday, 25th May 2004 @ 02:53:44 AM in AEST
Topic: NaturePoetry

When I walk in the rain
Then I praise the nature for her goodness
I can see the tree leaves turning green like grass
I can see the flowers with bright colours
I can see the barren land gets wet with water

When I walk in the rain
Then I hear the roaring sound of thunder and lightening
I can see all birds on the trees sit quietly
I can see no animals on the road walking
I can see all the ponds gets filled with rain water

When I walk in the rain
Then I listen the wind whistling like a melody
I can see all the trees dance to the tune of wind
I can see the rain water rushes down to the stream violently
I can see all the farmers are happy with their gain.

Ravi Sathasivam / Sri Lanka

Copyright ©2004 Ravi Sathasivam

Copyright Â© ravisada ... [ 2004-05-25 02:53:44]
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Re: When I walk in the rain...... (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Tuesday, 25th May 2004 @ 04:47:35 PM AEST
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this is beautiful ravi, i love rain so much myself, makes the world so pretty:) hugs n' love nessa

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