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Array ( [sid] => 48991 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => People Like You [time] => 2004-05-24 23:34:17 [hometext] => You could probably guess what this one is about.... I love comments [bodytext] => I hate you
you took what I did not give you
you took what was not yours
if I told anyone they wouldn't belive it anyway
don't worry, I will tell no one our little secret
so no one will find out how horrible you really are
look at what you have done
I trusted you and now I will never be able to, I will never want to
never again want to see your face
or that nasty grin when it was over and done
make those nasty comments you do
you hurt me so much inside
you took away something I can never ever get back, no matter how much I try
tell someone and I'll kill you, as you told me
I knew you so well, but yet I didn't-bond now broken apart, just because you couldn't control yourself
I was so young, I did not know
but now I do and I'm so enraged
that you would dishonor me or any other woman the way that you did
I wish I could erase every memory of you from my heart and mind-but I can't
your damn face is always gonna be there
I just want to scream at you
at everyone who just sat there and let it happen to me they didn't care
they were just glad it wasn't happening to them
people wonder why I used to think about killing myself
It's people like you
who do this to people like me
it tears away at their heart and being
no matter when it happened
it will always be there
and you wonder why I wanted to die,
let me put it simply...
it's people like you hurting people like me [comments] => 3 [counter] => 203 [topic] => 36 [informant] => screwup [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )

People Like You

Contributed by screwup on Monday, 24th May 2004 @ 11:34:17 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

I hate you
you took what I did not give you
you took what was not yours
if I told anyone they wouldn't belive it anyway
don't worry, I will tell no one our little secret
so no one will find out how horrible you really are
look at what you have done
I trusted you and now I will never be able to, I will never want to
never again want to see your face
or that nasty grin when it was over and done
make those nasty comments you do
you hurt me so much inside
you took away something I can never ever get back, no matter how much I try
tell someone and I'll kill you, as you told me
I knew you so well, but yet I didn't-bond now broken apart, just because you couldn't control yourself
I was so young, I did not know
but now I do and I'm so enraged
that you would dishonor me or any other woman the way that you did
I wish I could erase every memory of you from my heart and mind-but I can't
your damn face is always gonna be there
I just want to scream at you
at everyone who just sat there and let it happen to me they didn't care
they were just glad it wasn't happening to them
people wonder why I used to think about killing myself
It's people like you
who do this to people like me
it tears away at their heart and being
no matter when it happened
it will always be there
and you wonder why I wanted to die,
let me put it simply...
it's people like you hurting people like me

Copyright © screwup ... [ 2004-05-24 23:34:17]
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Re: People Like You (User Rating: 1 )
by thumper on Monday, 24th May 2004 @ 11:45:27 PM AEST
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This was a very powerful and painful write. I admire your ability to get it out. Writing can be very theraputic. What goes around, comes around. This person will get theirs, double. You ever need to talk pm me. I'm here.
Thumps ; 0 )

Re: People Like You (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Tuesday, 25th May 2004 @ 12:05:53 AM AEST
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This is so sad.
You've told your story well.
It's a shame but this sort of thing happens daily.
luv, huggs, prayer,
emy

Re: People Like You (User Rating: 1 )
by kidpoet_213 on Tuesday, 25th May 2004 @ 11:29:17 AM AEST
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I can relate to this one very well... I've been there... I know all the feelings... it's not easy...
carrying around the pain and memories inside... I... too... wanted to commit suicide...
My heart and prayers go out to u... if u need to talk... I'm here for u... just pm me...
Well written... I know it's heard to write all the emotions ur feeling down... u did a very good job with them.
~Donna~

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