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Array ( [sid] => 48981 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Anymore... [time] => 2004-05-24 22:25:46 [hometext] => Self struggling poetry bordering on song lyrics... when I read this... I hear a driving guitar and a hard rock beat... maybe something like Nelson... or maybe Henry Lee Summer... would like to know ur thoughts... [bodytext] => Wondering alone around this town
Thinking about all the things that's gotten me down
Especially the things... going on at home
There's a lot that I just don't want to know
Anymore...

'Cause this life... it seems to be...
Just one big empty dream to me
Filled with empty thoughts... pain and strife
That I live everyday of my life

People say... I come from such a sweet home...
Such sweet home...
But they just don't know...
No... they just don't know...
What goes on...
Behind closed doors...

What's a sweet home?
What's a sweet home?
What's a sweet home?
What? What? What?
I just don't know...
I just don't know...
I just don't know...
Know... Know... Know...
Anymore...

I feel like my life is just an empty page
Ripped from a book that's been dusted with age
The things I do... the things I say... in secret to you
All become public knowledge somehow... 'cause they're written down upon a stone tablet or two... for all to view

There's nothing here anymore... just rubbish heaped upon the floor... in piles
Discarded words... hollow thoughts... vacant smiles
To feel such emptiness and pain... I'm dying inside
Don't even know why I'm still alive...
Anymore...

People say... I come from such a sweet home...
Such sweet home...
But they just don't know...
No... they just don't know...
What goes on...
Behind closed doors...

What's a sweet home?
What's a sweet home?
What's a sweet home?
What? What? What?
I just don't know...
I just don't know...
I just don't know...
Know... Know... Know...
Anymore...

Yes... I'm having one of those days
I just wish it would all fade away
Along with this empty dream that keeps floating around inside my head...
Sometimes... making me wish... I were dead...

Right now... my mind's... a little hazy
And my life.... seems so crazy
I just don't know...
No... I just don't know...
What's a sweet home...
What's a sweet home...
Anymore... [comments] => 4 [counter] => 180 [topic] => 61 [informant] => kidpoet_213 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => selfstruggles )
Anymore...

Contributed by kidpoet_213 on Monday, 24th May 2004 @ 10:25:46 PM in AEST
Topic: selfstruggles



Wondering alone around this town
Thinking about all the things that's gotten me down
Especially the things... going on at home
There's a lot that I just don't want to know
Anymore...

'Cause this life... it seems to be...
Just one big empty dream to me
Filled with empty thoughts... pain and strife
That I live everyday of my life

People say... I come from such a sweet home...
Such sweet home...
But they just don't know...
No... they just don't know...
What goes on...
Behind closed doors...

What's a sweet home?
What's a sweet home?
What's a sweet home?
What? What? What?
I just don't know...
I just don't know...
I just don't know...
Know... Know... Know...
Anymore...

I feel like my life is just an empty page
Ripped from a book that's been dusted with age
The things I do... the things I say... in secret to you
All become public knowledge somehow... 'cause they're written down upon a stone tablet or two... for all to view

There's nothing here anymore... just rubbish heaped upon the floor... in piles
Discarded words... hollow thoughts... vacant smiles
To feel such emptiness and pain... I'm dying inside
Don't even know why I'm still alive...
Anymore...

People say... I come from such a sweet home...
Such sweet home...
But they just don't know...
No... they just don't know...
What goes on...
Behind closed doors...

What's a sweet home?
What's a sweet home?
What's a sweet home?
What? What? What?
I just don't know...
I just don't know...
I just don't know...
Know... Know... Know...
Anymore...

Yes... I'm having one of those days
I just wish it would all fade away
Along with this empty dream that keeps floating around inside my head...
Sometimes... making me wish... I were dead...

Right now... my mind's... a little hazy
And my life.... seems so crazy
I just don't know...
No... I just don't know...
What's a sweet home...
What's a sweet home...
Anymore...




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Re: Anymore... (User Rating: 1 )
by Silent-No-More on Monday, 24th May 2004 @ 10:40:21 PM AEST
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Oh! I like this! I have a hard time reading lyrics usually... I guess I'm just not musical enough to insert the tunes along with the words in my head. But nonetheless, I really enjoyed this.

Well done!


Re: Anymore... (User Rating: 1 )
by lovingcritters on Tuesday, 25th May 2004 @ 01:00:52 PM AEST
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Love the lyrics.......hope this doesn't get you down? I'm so glad you have your poetry....it helps to get it off your chest. You write lyrics the very best!
Good write. really liked it.
consue


Re: Anymore... (User Rating: 1 )
by willow_tara72002 on Thursday, 3rd June 2004 @ 07:55:03 AM AEST
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I can really relate to what your saying. about how you feel like your life is empy, and to feel so alone that you are dying inside... become emotionless. Its a great poem , and great way with your words


Re: Anymore... (User Rating: 1 )
by Aaron8124 on Sunday, 4th January 2009 @ 12:33:47 PM AEST
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I couldn't really put the music to it, but its beautiful, i loved it




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