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Array ( [sid] => 48970 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => ''Falling To Grace'' [time] => 2004-05-24 21:41:49 [hometext] => About me and my Fiance's First kiss, that's when we both fell in love [bodytext] => The wind brushes my cheek like a blanket,
soft and smooth. I am floating,
with no purpose, just searching...
When I look up, I see you.
I lose my sense. You smile, I blush.
my heartbeat begins to Race, trying to
break free, trying to bring me to you,
my heart knows, I know. I move closer,
you lean in, I close my eyes,
everything stops... We fall,
deeper and deeper. holding on to
nothing but each other, keeping one
another alive. I breathe, You exhale,
my heart beats, Your blood pumps.
Suddenly we crash, we walk away, The
world mangled behind us. Our former
lives dead..I look at you a little scared..."Is this heaven?" you ask,
then I look at you, You smile,
I blush, we know. [comments] => 4 [counter] => 176 [topic] => 2 [informant] => Rosie [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

''Falling To Grace''

Contributed by Rosie on Monday, 24th May 2004 @ 09:41:49 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

The wind brushes my cheek like a blanket,
soft and smooth. I am floating,
with no purpose, just searching...
When I look up, I see you.
I lose my sense. You smile, I blush.
my heartbeat begins to Race, trying to
break free, trying to bring me to you,
my heart knows, I know. I move closer,
you lean in, I close my eyes,
everything stops... We fall,
deeper and deeper. holding on to
nothing but each other, keeping one
another alive. I breathe, You exhale,
my heart beats, Your blood pumps.
Suddenly we crash, we walk away, The
world mangled behind us. Our former
lives dead..I look at you a little scared..."Is this heaven?" you ask,
then I look at you, You smile,
I blush, we know.

Copyright © Rosie ... [ 2004-05-24 21:41:49]
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Re: ''Falling To Grace'' (User Rating: 1 )
by Daniela_Maria_Violin on Monday, 24th May 2004 @ 09:46:56 PM AEST
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wow... such an enchanting first kiss... this is so beautifully written... great job

Re: ''Falling To Grace'' (User Rating: 1 )
by ShadowDaughter on Monday, 24th May 2004 @ 09:57:51 PM AEST
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Like Daniela said, beautifully written. A fantastic description of love's simple and sweet beginnings. Perfectly done and it captured love so very well . . . I loved the part that said,

"We fall,
deeper and deeper. holding on to
nothing but each other, keeping one
another alive. "

Excellent job.

--Nora

Re: ''Falling To Grace'' (User Rating: 1 )
by kidpoet_213 on Monday, 24th May 2004 @ 11:43:20 PM AEST
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Yes indeed... beautifully written... excellent job...
Keep at it... U got the gift...
~Donna~

Re: ''Falling To Grace'' (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Tuesday, 25th May 2004 @ 04:38:31 PM AEST
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excellent, sooo beautifully written:) hugs n' love nessa

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