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I remember the day you came into my life and stole my love.
Your gentle words were like dew on my face, awakening me from the heat of the world's hatred.
That kiss gave me a taste of your passion, your feelings for me.
That kiss flowed though my body and my soul and made me breath again.
At last, the day came when your sweet taste was mine.
Now that your a part of my life I can't let you go or be.
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Contributed by blackflamingskull on Monday, 24th May 2004 @ 06:22:01 PM in AEST
Topic: LoveRemembered

As i lay in the morning light i stared into the face of my love.
I remember the day you came into my life and stole my love.
Your gentle words were like dew on my face, awakening me from the heat of the world's hatred.
That kiss gave me a taste of your passion, your feelings for me.
That kiss flowed though my body and my soul and made me breath again.
At last, the day came when your sweet taste was mine.
Now that your a part of my life I can't let you go or be.

Copyright © blackflamingskull ... [ 2004-05-24 18:22:01]
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Re: untitled (User Rating: 1 )
by Soulless on Monday, 24th May 2004 @ 06:52:54 PM AEST
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You sell yourself too short, especially for you ability to write. I found this poem beautiful and pure gold. Beautiful job.

Kisses,
~Soulless~

Re: untitled (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Monday, 24th May 2004 @ 09:00:42 PM AEST
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very loving and sweet:) hugs n' love nessa

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Re: untitled (User Rating: 1 )
by blossomingcherry5353 on Tuesday, 1st June 2004 @ 06:18:09 PM AEST
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Brian!!!! i can't believe you. That was bueatiful really bueatiful. You seem to surprize me everyday with your bueatiful words. Your basicly the only one that understands me and loves me for me. love you

blossomingcherry5353 just guess who
shannon kisses and hugs xoxo

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