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Array ( [sid] => 48941 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Pieces [time] => 2004-05-24 17:48:58 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I keep finding pieces of myself
I’d tell you if I thought you’d care
It’s illogical but still it’s true
I find pieces almost everywhere

I keep finding pieces of myself
Twisted, hidden in a written verse
Lurking too in the corner of memory
Being broken has been my curse

I keep finding pieces of myself
I must go back and retrace my step
Oh! That I could be like others
And know where they were all kept

I keep finding pieces of myself
They were scattered about in the past
I’m collecting them all in a drawer
Searching until I find the very last

I keep finding pieces of myself
I’m completing the puzzle somehow
No more pieces falling here and there
I put myself back together now

[comments] => 10 [counter] => 219 [topic] => 61 [informant] => Silent-No-More [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 15 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => selfstruggles )

Pieces

Contributed by Silent-No-More on Monday, 24th May 2004 @ 05:48:58 PM in AEST
Topic: selfstruggles

I keep finding pieces of myself
I’d tell you if I thought you’d care
It’s illogical but still it’s true
I find pieces almost everywhere

I keep finding pieces of myself
Twisted, hidden in a written verse
Lurking too in the corner of memory
Being broken has been my curse

I keep finding pieces of myself
I must go back and retrace my step
Oh! That I could be like others
And know where they were all kept

I keep finding pieces of myself
They were scattered about in the past
I’m collecting them all in a drawer
Searching until I find the very last

I keep finding pieces of myself
I’m completing the puzzle somehow
No more pieces falling here and there
I put myself back together now

Copyright Â© Silent-No-More ... [ 2004-05-24 17:48:58]
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Re: Pieces (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Monday, 24th May 2004 @ 06:00:12 PM AEST
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wonderfully inspiring poem! hugs n' love nessa

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Re: Pieces (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 24th May 2004 @ 06:11:31 PM AEST
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That is a very well worked piece. It was very expressive and had a great ending.
Well done (again).

Re: Pieces (User Rating: 1 )
by Elena on Monday, 24th May 2004 @ 06:17:06 PM AEST
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Very fine.

Re: Pieces (User Rating: 1 )
by livingdedgurl on Monday, 24th May 2004 @ 06:32:02 PM AEST
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how cute its nicely written...

Re: Pieces (User Rating: 1 )
by Soulless on Monday, 24th May 2004 @ 06:32:56 PM AEST
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Very well done, I love the writing style used.
This is a very well constructed poem.

Kisses,
~Soulless~

Re: Pieces (User Rating: 1 )
by secretwind on Monday, 24th May 2004 @ 08:23:54 PM AEST
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Well Done...

Re: Pieces (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 25th May 2004 @ 10:58:00 AM AEST
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I love the title, and the way the words all flow from one thought to another. Nice work you have done here in conveying what alot of us feel...broken into pieces...in hopes of finding the right piece that fits in.
Angel always...godspeed...joni

Re: Pieces (User Rating: 1 )
by swiftsouljah on Thursday, 27th May 2004 @ 10:09:10 AM AEST
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great poem... "finding peices of myself" oh vivid that is to me right now... everydays an adventure i never know what ill find... all too often i find that im still broken...

great job

wayne

Re: Pieces (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 4th May 2006 @ 02:48:47 AM AEST
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I love the way this is pieced together.....no pun intended. "I’m completing the puzzle somehow"
The use of metaphors to explain your broken self and the twist of hope at the end. Absolutely brilliant, Snemmers.

Timber

Re: Pieces (User Rating: 1 )
by windowguy on Tuesday, 26th May 2009 @ 04:20:53 AM AEST
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I like this. Endearing read.

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