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He’s popular because he’s sweet
To everyone he comes to meet
He’s pretty smart and very cool
He’s cute enough to make girls drool
He likes to act. He likes to sing.
He’s up to try most anything.
He’s brave enough to take a chance.
He loves to sing and likes to dance.
He’ll ask you how you really feel.
He’ll even listen—yeah, for real!
He likes to rap a rhythmic poem.
From clique to clique, this guy can roam.
He’s funny and he’s modest too.
He hates to see somebody blue.
He’s nonchalant and real polite.
His smile and eyes are big and bright.
He’s never once meant any harm.
His presence just shows off his charm.
He’d love a good ol' game of Poker.
He is a guy you'd deem a joker.
He’s not perfect—this is true,
But he’s quite close to the cue.
Yes, he’s great, this we all know…
But out with him we’ll never go
It’s just a rule that no one breaks
—It's just a risk nobody takes.

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Mr. Untouchable

Contributed by liquidsunshine on Monday, 24th May 2004 @ 05:20:28 PM in AEST
Topic: dedicatedpoems

He’s popular because he’s sweet
To everyone he comes to meet
He’s pretty smart and very cool
He’s cute enough to make girls drool
He likes to act. He likes to sing.
He’s up to try most anything.
He’s brave enough to take a chance.
He loves to sing and likes to dance.
He’ll ask you how you really feel.
He’ll even listen—yeah, for real!
He likes to rap a rhythmic poem.
From clique to clique, this guy can roam.
He’s funny and he’s modest too.
He hates to see somebody blue.
He’s nonchalant and real polite.
His smile and eyes are big and bright.
He’s never once meant any harm.
His presence just shows off his charm.
He’d love a good ol' game of Poker.
He is a guy you'd deem a joker.
He’s not perfect—this is true,
But he’s quite close to the cue.
Yes, he’s great, this we all know…
But out with him we’ll never go
It’s just a rule that no one breaks
—It's just a risk nobody takes.

Copyright Â© liquidsunshine ... [ 2004-05-24 17:20:28]
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Re: Mr. Untouchable (User Rating: 1 )
by eatfresh22 on Monday, 24th May 2004 @ 05:32:29 PM AEST
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This was a really cute poem. It seems that there is always one of those guys at every high school. Too bad they are untouchable! Hahaha, but they are so much fun. Creative and fun. I enjoyed reading this poem.
~Carrie~

Re: Mr. Untouchable (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Monday, 24th May 2004 @ 05:39:07 PM AEST
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ahhh!! this is fabulous!! i love how you wrote this, hugs n' love nessa

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Re: Mr. Untouchable (User Rating: 1 )
by antares on Monday, 24th May 2004 @ 05:50:07 PM AEST
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yea i know how that goes lol! i definitely kno the one who fits this at my school! real nice and cute poem! luved it!

Re: Mr. Untouchable (User Rating: 1 )
by livingdedgurl on Monday, 24th May 2004 @ 06:28:17 PM AEST
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that is so true...i love it aaliyah

Re: Mr. Untouchable (User Rating: 1 )
by RavishingRoses14 on Monday, 24th May 2004 @ 08:26:31 PM AEST
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OMG! That was so good! You should really give it to him, you know. I know it takes guts to do something like that, but it would be worth it to him. Maybe he wouldn't be so Untouchable to you.

Re: Mr. Untouchable (User Rating: 1 )
by sweetangeluk on Tuesday, 25th May 2004 @ 05:39:03 AM AEST
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A Brilliant poem Always the best looker I know the one who all the girls fancy

You never know could be you fingers crossed

Love Angelxxxxx

Re: Mr. Untouchable (User Rating: 1 )
by thumper on Tuesday, 25th May 2004 @ 10:00:25 PM AEST
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You know I would try to become his friend. You never know what would happen after that. He sounds like a real jewel. : 0 ) I liked how you wrote this and it had real good flow. Nice write. Thumps ; 0 )

Re: Mr. Untouchable (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Thursday, 27th May 2004 @ 06:13:01 PM AEST
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Wow this is an awesome poem, seems like this guy's parents taught him well.

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