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If no one polluted and pillaged our sea
Sing me your song of how we could feel
To walk through great forests and experience the thrill

Tell me a story of what they would say
If peace was a playground where children could play
Show me an emotion that doesn’t exist
And ill show you devotion in a form of a wish.

Shed me a tear of the sadness you mask
And ill show you the joy that I could bring to your past
Show me your innocence and ill show you that child
Who brings us this world where no one can hide

Give us the strength to travel this road
To change the direction and carry this load
Of the damage we have done to this planet of earth
Who has given her all from the day of her birth

Show me compassion and I will show you the way
Of sharing together and loving each day
There is more to this life than dreaming away
The chamber of horrors that scatter our day

So dream me a dream of what will be done
Sing me that song that already is sung
Tell me that story of when we were so blind
And embraced our extinction and rekindled mankind.

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Dream me a Dream

Contributed by tashban on Monday, 24th May 2004 @ 04:23:57 PM in AEST
Topic: DreamsandWishes

Dream me a dream of what it could be
If no one polluted and pillaged our sea
Sing me your song of how we could feel
To walk through great forests and experience the thrill

Tell me a story of what they would say
If peace was a playground where children could play
Show me an emotion that doesn’t exist
And ill show you devotion in a form of a wish.

Shed me a tear of the sadness you mask
And ill show you the joy that I could bring to your past
Show me your innocence and ill show you that child
Who brings us this world where no one can hide

Give us the strength to travel this road
To change the direction and carry this load
Of the damage we have done to this planet of earth
Who has given her all from the day of her birth

Show me compassion and I will show you the way
Of sharing together and loving each day
There is more to this life than dreaming away
The chamber of horrors that scatter our day

So dream me a dream of what will be done
Sing me that song that already is sung
Tell me that story of when we were so blind
And embraced our extinction and rekindled mankind.

Copyright Â© tashban ... [ 2004-05-24 16:23:57]
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Re: Dream me a Dream (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Monday, 24th May 2004 @ 04:35:53 PM AEST
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This is an awesome poem. Full of heart and devotion. I feel the same way too.

Re: Dream me a Dream (User Rating: 1 )
by eatfresh22 on Monday, 24th May 2004 @ 05:15:08 PM AEST
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The rhythym in this poem was really catchy and caught my attention. I liked it a lot. Nicely done.
~Carrie~

Re: Dream me a Dream (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Monday, 24th May 2004 @ 05:25:11 PM AEST
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simply beautiful and so well written:) hugs n' love nessa

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Re: Dream me a Dream (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 24th May 2004 @ 06:23:56 PM AEST
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Truly awsome poem.One of the best I've read in some while.
Lovewriter

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