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Array ( [sid] => 48923 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => You Cant Kill The Dead [time] => 2004-05-24 15:59:35 [hometext] => NOW ITS YOUR TURN TO FALL INSTEAD OF FLY [bodytext] => No one wonders about the poison in her veins
And that one bullet to the heart
Would not stop the flow of toxic
Around her body
Like unwanted trash
Thrown in the rubbish bin
But she has chains to escape
To escape the tauntful cries
That haunt nothing but a made up existence
And a slash to the wrist
Would not drown her in blood
But in laughter
You see it in the reflection of the razorblade
Her smiling right back at you
Like a ghost in your nightmares
You let her fly with wings of stone
To fall instead of glide
You killed her once before
You cant do it again
Its your turn to fall
Instead of fly [comments] => 3 [counter] => 172 [topic] => 39 [informant] => bleeding_chains [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Grief )

You Cant Kill The Dead

Contributed by bleeding_chains on Monday, 24th May 2004 @ 03:59:35 PM in AEST
Topic: Grief

No one wonders about the poison in her veins
And that one bullet to the heart
Would not stop the flow of toxic
Around her body
Like unwanted trash
Thrown in the rubbish bin
But she has chains to escape
To escape the tauntful cries
That haunt nothing but a made up existence
And a slash to the wrist
Would not drown her in blood
But in laughter
You see it in the reflection of the razorblade
Her smiling right back at you
Like a ghost in your nightmares
You let her fly with wings of stone
To fall instead of glide
You killed her once before
You cant do it again
Its your turn to fall
Instead of fly

Copyright © bleeding_chains ... [ 2004-05-24 15:59:35]
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Re: You Cant Kill The Dead (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Monday, 24th May 2004 @ 05:20:24 PM AEST
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powerful poem, hugs n' love nessa

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Re: You Cant Kill The Dead (User Rating: 1 )
by secretwind on Monday, 24th May 2004 @ 09:01:16 PM AEST
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WELL DONE....AND SO POWERFUL.

Re: You Cant Kill The Dead (User Rating: 1 )
by lostinmyself on Sunday, 13th June 2004 @ 08:09:23 AM AEST
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wow, this is great!
So powerful, and angry too i think.
You use great descriptions.

"You let her fly with wings of stone
To fall instead of glide"

great job! phil xxx

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