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Array ( [sid] => 48914 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => She Had Such Big Blue Eyes [time] => 2004-05-24 13:50:24 [hometext] => This happened nearly 44 years ago, not my intention to make you sad...only share my life with you in the way I know best. [bodytext] => Born into a family with many brother's and sister's,
she somehow stood out above the rest.
Blonde curls swirled, and she had a smile
that I think was the best.

She was plump and cooing...a picture of delight,
doing all the baby things for us.
We all took for granted, I suppose...
when at times she began to fuss.

But, her eyes.....revealed something very deep.
Something in this child, told everyone, "I hurt!"
And so, the doctor examined her one day,
and his gentle hands lifted up her shirt.

Nothing could take away the look, in her deep blue eyes,
as she was watching us and telling us...she was wise beyond her year.
The tumor in her belly grew, and we could only watch
those big blue eyes overflowing with her tear.

And on the day God took her home with him,
a peace in her was seen...the pain, somehow was gone.
I remember Sharon, a child....who taught us love.
Her eyes burned forever in my heart, her cooing, a gentle song.

Author: June E. Miller (Justalady)
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She Had Such Big Blue Eyes

Contributed by Justalady on Monday, 24th May 2004 @ 01:50:24 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Born into a family with many brother's and sister's,
she somehow stood out above the rest.
Blonde curls swirled, and she had a smile
that I think was the best.

She was plump and cooing...a picture of delight,
doing all the baby things for us.
We all took for granted, I suppose...
when at times she began to fuss.

But, her eyes.....revealed something very deep.
Something in this child, told everyone, "I hurt!"
And so, the doctor examined her one day,
and his gentle hands lifted up her shirt.

Nothing could take away the look, in her deep blue eyes,
as she was watching us and telling us...she was wise beyond her year.
The tumor in her belly grew, and we could only watch
those big blue eyes overflowing with her tear.

And on the day God took her home with him,
a peace in her was seen...the pain, somehow was gone.
I remember Sharon, a child....who taught us love.
Her eyes burned forever in my heart, her cooing, a gentle song.

Author: June E. Miller (Justalady)
8/19/2002

Copyright © Justalady ... [ 2004-05-24 13:50:24]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: She Had Such Big Blue Eyes (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Monday, 24th May 2004 @ 01:59:54 PM AEST
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Sad but beautifully and luvingly written.
luv, huggs,
emy
She sounds like she was a very beautifull, special person. A fine tribute.

Re: She Had Such Big Blue Eyes (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Monday, 24th May 2004 @ 04:38:09 PM AEST
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oh june, im so sorry for your loss, you do her proud here, i feel like i saw her pretty eyes and felt her soul, this is such a sad but amazingly beautiful poem, my heart goes out to you, hugs n' love nessa x

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Re: She Had Such Big Blue Eyes (User Rating: 1 )
by LOWMAN613 on Monday, 24th May 2004 @ 09:51:23 PM AEST
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OMG This was so sad but beautifully done in her honor! I'm still wipping tears! Christina

Re: She Had Such Big Blue Eyes (User Rating: 1 )
by Avarice_Riot on Tuesday, 1st June 2004 @ 07:17:05 AM AEST
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This was a beautifully tragic and sad poem, I am so sorry.

Re: She Had Such Big Blue Eyes (User Rating: 1 )
by blueheart on Tuesday, 15th June 2004 @ 09:19:41 PM AEST
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Oh, this is so sad, it tugged at my heart strings. Sucha sad poem immersed with a lot of love.

Re: She Had Such Big Blue Eyes (User Rating: 1 )
by Trisha on Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 07:42:12 PM AEST
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Hey June! This Was Good. Keep Up The Good Work. Just Sorry What Happen

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