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Array ( [sid] => 48913 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Dear World [time] => 2004-05-24 13:39:46 [hometext] => this is a suicidal letter telling people that i am sorry i can't go on. [bodytext] => Dear world,
Are you listening?
Can you hear me tonight?
Can you see through my conscience?
Can you hear through my fright?

Im so sorry that i failed,
That I didn't do my best.
So I couldn't complete,
The ultimate test.

But it just got to hard,
It wasn't worth the try.
It wasn't worth the sadness,
Please tell people not to cry.
Tell my friends that I'm sorry,
I didn't say goodbye.

But I'll watch over you world,
And make sure your all right.
I'll be with you forever,
Even though I'm not here in sight. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 237 [topic] => 36 [informant] => nickibabe421 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )

Dear World

Contributed by nickibabe421 on Monday, 24th May 2004 @ 01:39:46 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

Dear world,
Are you listening?
Can you hear me tonight?
Can you see through my conscience?
Can you hear through my fright?

Im so sorry that i failed,
That I didn't do my best.
So I couldn't complete,
The ultimate test.

But it just got to hard,
It wasn't worth the try.
It wasn't worth the sadness,
Please tell people not to cry.
Tell my friends that I'm sorry,
I didn't say goodbye.

But I'll watch over you world,
And make sure your all right.
I'll be with you forever,
Even though I'm not here in sight.

Copyright © nickibabe421 ... [ 2004-05-24 13:39:46]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Dear World (User Rating: 1 )
by Heartfilledblood on Monday, 24th May 2004 @ 01:50:11 PM AEST
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Suicide isnt ever the answer. No one is 100% sure what happens after life. Your leaving so many loved ones. People will miss you. Everyone has a lot too live for even if it doesnt seem like it. Look deep within...
There is always someone you cant leave for your life being gone will impact them too the point of killing themself and I know you dont want too bring harm too anyone but yourself but sucide impacts everyone in your life.

If you need too talk you can whisper me.

Re: Dear World (User Rating: 1 )
by Tinkkerbelle on Monday, 24th May 2004 @ 02:55:00 PM AEST
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Touching letter. I understand perfectly where you are coming from and what you mean. I don't want to preach to you about suicide not being the answer, because that's not what you need to hear, and it probably won't do that much good. If you would like to talk with someone else who's been there, maybe I can help you. I can talk with you, or maybe you just need someone to listen. Sometimes that's all it takes. Please feel free to whisper me or email me. PatrioticPixie@hotmail.com

Re: Dear World (User Rating: 1 )
by eatfresh22 on Monday, 24th May 2004 @ 05:22:41 PM AEST
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Intense poem. I hope and pray that you can go on. There's always hope, so don't give up. You are talented, and there's a plan for your life. Take heart...endure the world's suffering. You can do it. Be strong!
~Carrie~

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