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Array ( [sid] => 48844 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Till Death Do Us Part [time] => 2004-05-23 22:27:50 [hometext] => This was what i wrote to my husband when we were falling apart [bodytext] => The constant yearning of destinies unkown
The seperate directions we seem to have grown
The emptiness I feel when you leave me alone
What I assume you felt but have never shown

The hurtful words I swear you dont mean
The distance we have, the signs I wont see
The words I long for, love's selfless decree
The man I dreamed of, the man you'll never be

The touch of your body laying there at night
The heat and silence making everything right
The wordless mending of the constant fight
The ecstasy created before the break of light

When you dont look and you dont even care
Stripped naked and desolate I am laying there
Being consumed by your disapproving glare
The pain you cause is more then I can bear

The truth that screams from deep in my core
The moment is over, you dont love me anymore
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Till Death Do Us Part

Contributed by brigitte7735 on Sunday, 23rd May 2004 @ 10:27:50 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



The constant yearning of destinies unkown
The seperate directions we seem to have grown
The emptiness I feel when you leave me alone
What I assume you felt but have never shown

The hurtful words I swear you dont mean
The distance we have, the signs I wont see
The words I long for, love's selfless decree
The man I dreamed of, the man you'll never be

The touch of your body laying there at night
The heat and silence making everything right
The wordless mending of the constant fight
The ecstasy created before the break of light

When you dont look and you dont even care
Stripped naked and desolate I am laying there
Being consumed by your disapproving glare
The pain you cause is more then I can bear

The truth that screams from deep in my core
The moment is over, you dont love me anymore




Copyright © brigitte7735 ... [ 2004-05-23 22:27:50]
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Re: Till Death Do Us Part (User Rating: 1 )
by LOWMAN613 on Sunday, 23rd May 2004 @ 10:34:29 PM AEST
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A very painful situation I hope everythings ok now.Christina


Re: Till Death Do Us Part (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 24th May 2004 @ 05:51:56 AM AEST
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So full of emotion. It bleeds with pain. Wonderful write.
Lovewriter


Re: Till Death Do Us Part (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 24th May 2004 @ 10:35:13 AM AEST
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Painfully emoted.
Very real write.
Thanks for sharing it.


Re: Till Death Do Us Part (User Rating: 1 )
by forever_lonely on Monday, 28th June 2004 @ 06:29:42 PM AEST
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Such a message with the power and passion this holds within its lines comes but once every millenium, a thouroughly powerful piece, I feel that bite coming ever closer, lips gently carressing the heart of the monster, teeth ready to devour all in its path, this should be an interesting road to watch blossom.

An amazing piece, full of emotion and meaning techincally perfect in every manner another timeless write

Luke




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