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[sid] => 48833
[catid] => 1
[aid] => mick
[title] => Pretty Tears
[time] => 2004-05-23 20:43:48
[hometext] => My first attempt at a haiku. Thanks for the help, Cynthia!!
[bodytext] => Pretty teardrops spill,
From arched lashes of the eye,
Glistening away.
[comments] => 12
[counter] => 197
[topic] => 17
[informant] => blueheart
[notes] =>
[ihome] => 0
[alanguage] => english
[acomm] => 0
[haspoll] => 0
[pollID] => 0
[score] => 32
[ratings] => 7
[editpoem] => 1
[associated] =>
[topicname] => Haiku
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Pretty Tears
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blueheart
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Sunday, 23rd May 2004 @ 08:43:48 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Pretty teardrops spill,
From arched lashes of the eye,
Glistening away.
Copyright ©
blueheart
... [
2004-05-23 20:43:48]
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Re: Pretty Tears
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 23rd May 2004 @ 08:58:00 PM AEST
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oh hanna this is lovely!! hugs n' love nessa
@->>->:- |
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Re: Pretty Tears
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by reprobate on
Sunday, 23rd May 2004 @ 09:11:22 PM AEST
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great first write. keep going.
thanks for sharing |
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Re: Pretty Tears
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by Jenni_K on
Sunday, 23rd May 2004 @ 09:32:27 PM AEST
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Oh Blueheart, this is awesome...well done.. Kudos to your 'teacher'...
Jenni |
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Re: Pretty Tears
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 23rd May 2004 @ 10:00:59 PM AEST
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Well, your first attempt was a roaring success. Congratulations my friend.
Rita |
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Re: Pretty Tears
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by Twisterchaser on
Friday, 28th May 2004 @ 11:18:03 PM AEST
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| volums of stories are told with tears...great |
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Re: Pretty Tears
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by Soulless on
Sunday, 30th May 2004 @ 12:21:05 PM AEST
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Beautifully expressed words. I could never write Haiku poetry. You have mastered it well with just the first try.
Kisses,
~Soulless~ |
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Re: Pretty Tears
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by wray on
Friday, 4th June 2004 @ 10:35:03 PM AEST
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Must be something about haikus... the brevity of your words makes this single image linger so well in the mind.
Ever heard Pretty When You Cry by VAST? If you haven't I recommend it, love that song and it sounds like you might enjoy it too =) |
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Re: Pretty Tears
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by emystar on
Sunday, 6th June 2004 @ 06:51:53 AM AEST
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Good work.
luv, huggs,
emy |
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Re: Pretty Tears
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by venkat on
Monday, 7th June 2004 @ 12:04:54 AM AEST
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| excellent.. venkat |
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Re: Pretty Tears
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by Kie on
Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 08:06:27 PM AEST
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It would be an awesome sight to place a camera near an eye while a tear hovers on a lash. I would imagine that would be awesome to see.
You are good at haiku and I like the impact you make with it.
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Re: Pretty Tears
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by Justalady on
Saturday, 26th June 2004 @ 04:18:54 PM AEST
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| Beautiful..... sure wish I could say so much in so few words. Nice work. June |
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Re: Pretty Tears
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by Essentially9 on
Friday, 6th August 2004 @ 12:25:57 AM AEST
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| well done. most first attempts arent formatted correctly. excellent write. |
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