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Array ( [sid] => 48819 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Can't Take It [time] => 2004-05-23 18:21:14 [hometext] => Just a random mix of my thoughts today, things I'm dealing with, etc. [bodytext] => Take me way from this life
Don't let me see you again
I can't take it anymore.
Let me waste this fate
Take it all away
All I ask is for someone
To be by my side
Don't let you see me like this
Can't take it all anymore

Graduation Day is upon me
What do I have to show for it
Can't even walk across the stage
Should have kept my nowhere job
At least I'd have some money,
Well maybe not...

Can't live like this anymore
Can't see your face again
I just can't take it anymore
I just want someone to be here.
Not this false love,
that too busy to talk to you Bullcrap.
I'm sick of this crap
I just want to end it all

Can't give up though
Someone may pull though
and be there like I need
I can only hope that happens [comments] => 3 [counter] => 220 [topic] => 52 [informant] => vampiricsuccubus [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => goodbyepoetry )

Can't Take It

Contributed by vampiricsuccubus on Sunday, 23rd May 2004 @ 06:21:14 PM in AEST
Topic: goodbyepoetry

Take me way from this life
Don't let me see you again
I can't take it anymore.
Let me waste this fate
Take it all away
All I ask is for someone
To be by my side
Don't let you see me like this
Can't take it all anymore

Graduation Day is upon me
What do I have to show for it
Can't even walk across the stage
Should have kept my nowhere job
At least I'd have some money,
Well maybe not...

Can't live like this anymore
Can't see your face again
I just can't take it anymore
I just want someone to be here.
Not this false love,
that too busy to talk to you Bullcrap.
I'm sick of this crap
I just want to end it all

Can't give up though
Someone may pull though
and be there like I need
I can only hope that happens

Copyright © vampiricsuccubus ... [ 2004-05-23 18:21:14]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Can't Take It (User Rating: 1 )
by bitson_2005 on Sunday, 23rd May 2004 @ 06:25:47 PM AEST
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Well, I do have to say, DONT YOU DARE GIVE UP! Your only beginning life!! You get your pride up, and you walk across that stage and get that diploma!!!! And get out of this wo-is-me stage. MOVE ON!

Re: Can't Take It (User Rating: 1 )
by bitson_2005 on Sunday, 23rd May 2004 @ 06:28:04 PM AEST
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Well, I do have to say, DONT YOU DARE GIVE UP! Your only beginning life!! You get your pride up, and you walk across that stage and get that diploma!!!! And get out of this wo-is-me stage. MOVE ON!

Re: Can't Take It (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 23rd May 2004 @ 09:10:12 PM AEST
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Yes there are plenty of reasons to go on, beleive in yourself and stand strong, help is where and when you least expect it.

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