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Letter to His Love
Contributed by
carebear
on
Sunday, 23rd May 2004 @ 02:08:40 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Letter To His Love
I couldn't handle midnight monsters they ate me up,
Each time I made a new cut suddenly I felt dead,
Aching wounds bruised my heart allowing it to bleed,
Causing me no sleep, voices in my head, bad dreams
The sparkle you once saw in my blue eyes had faded away.
Pouring rain today right now calms my jittering chills,
Fills me up to the rim stupid quilt, lost hope, dying faith
I'm choking back my tears while writing this to you wiping away the blood gushing from my wrists
I hate all that I've put you through it wasn't fair.
Scars on my arms millions sore,
Dry blood crusted over
Cigarette burns delicate my shoulders,
Chest and hands
I'm now a ugly monster trapped in a cage a freak,
I've lost all balance to stand on my own to feet,
Starting to get weak I cant write anymore,
Not scared to die.
I've locked out so many people I hope
they'll forgive me
Those sad tears you shed baby please don't cry
you're ok
I'll wrap my wings around you, together we can fly away.
©Care 5/23/04
Copyright ©
carebear
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2004-05-23 14:08:40] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Letter to His Love
(User Rating: 1 ) by Wolfareen on
Tuesday, 25th May 2004 @ 02:19:33 PM AEST (User
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Why haven't you got any comments for this?! I LOVE it! Oh, I nearly cried it was so beautiful. Keep writing! And I LOVE the last line, its perfect. Natli xx |
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Re: Letter to His Love
(User Rating: 1 ) by Wolfareen on
Tuesday, 25th May 2004 @ 02:22:53 PM AEST (User
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this is so close to the truth, im scared this is how my guy will end up, this is how he and i get.... |
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Re: Letter to His Love
(User Rating: 1 ) by -thesiscokid- on
Tuesday, 25th May 2004 @ 07:28:10 PM AEST (User
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I absolutely loved how you took somebodies pain and portrayed it in your own view. It seems so real, and so very painful. But I especially like the last stanza. Last line was great. |
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Re: Letter to His Love
(User Rating: 1 ) by TwEeK on
Sunday, 30th May 2004 @ 09:32:07 AM AEST (User
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omg such a beautifully sad poem, it brought me to tears
tweeky
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