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All my love...
Contributed by
reilt
on
Sunday, 23rd May 2004 @ 01:31:10 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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It's the fear again.
Mind without a voice,
Unspoken.
These thoughts die
A slow, silent death,
Unsure of origin,
Unsettled
And not at peace with themselves.
I equals own worst enemy.
An equation fighting
The addition of you
When you are worth more
Than a surplus of me.
And I am an open wound
That words, salted,
Stretch wide and rub immerse themselves in.
It's a past,
It's the 'never good enough' theory
Held by too many,
It's the way I view,
Impaired,
Myself.
And I hold myself down
While you take your place
On the pedastal
I've erected in honour.
I have no words now
To say
But there is more in my heart for you
Than you know.
Never a brave soul
Have I been.
My tongue and fear
Finding each other in the darkness,
Chasing me into...
Messed up and frightened.
One day...One day
I hope to speak,
Unabashedly,
Free flow,
Free fall
And offer you my truths
As well as all my love.
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reilt
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2004-05-23 13:31:10] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: All my love...
(User Rating: 1 ) by pixie on
Sunday, 23rd May 2004 @ 01:38:25 PM AEST (User
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Just brilliant,
I'm sure in time you will learn to drop your gaurd abit, it will be a long , but very worthy process for you both, thank you for sharing your poem with us ((((HUGS))))
Takecare,
Pixie xxx
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Re: All my love...
(User Rating: 1 ) by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 23rd May 2004 @ 07:37:56 PM AEST (User
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what a beautiful expression of feelings, alas, no human is worth putting on a pedestal, eventually we are found out to be just that, human, be true to you:) hugs n' love nessa
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