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Array ( [sid] => 48767 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => How I Feel [time] => 2004-05-23 09:22:53 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Rising from my slumber
From dreams that seem so real
You look at me with wonder
And ask me how I feel

Thoughtfully I choose my words
My confidence is weak
I see a tear fall from your eye
As you hear the words I speak

"I'm feeling pessimistic, impatient, and distressed
A little bit unruly, and under great duress
Vulnerable, and violent
Unstable and severe
Uncertain and uneasy
Upset and quite unclear
Impulsive, indecisive, indifferent, and restrained
Utterly incapable of dealing with my pain
Perniciously despondent
Despicably inept
Illusional and furious
Emotionally unkempt
Skeptical and paralyzed
Uncivilized and numb
Immoral, introverted, hysterical and dumb"

And now you know the way I feel
And why I wear this mask
And just like every other day
You're sorry that you asked

Copyright: Tammy Hendershot
2004 [comments] => 2 [counter] => 165 [topic] => 6 [informant] => tamilyn [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => AngryPoetry )

How I Feel

Contributed by tamilyn on Sunday, 23rd May 2004 @ 09:22:53 AM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry

Rising from my slumber
From dreams that seem so real
You look at me with wonder
And ask me how I feel

Thoughtfully I choose my words
My confidence is weak
I see a tear fall from your eye
As you hear the words I speak

"I'm feeling pessimistic, impatient, and distressed
A little bit unruly, and under great duress
Vulnerable, and violent
Unstable and severe
Uncertain and uneasy
Upset and quite unclear
Impulsive, indecisive, indifferent, and restrained
Utterly incapable of dealing with my pain
Perniciously despondent
Despicably inept
Illusional and furious
Emotionally unkempt
Skeptical and paralyzed
Uncivilized and numb
Immoral, introverted, hysterical and dumb"

And now you know the way I feel
And why I wear this mask
And just like every other day
You're sorry that you asked

Copyright: Tammy Hendershot
2004

Copyright © tamilyn ... [ 2004-05-23 09:22:53]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: How I Feel (User Rating: 1 )
by Elena on Sunday, 23rd May 2004 @ 10:01:00 AM AEST
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Not sorry I asked. Good stuff...

E

Re: How I Feel (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 23rd May 2004 @ 02:10:09 PM AEST
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This is so descriptive and well-executed. I'm impressed and desirous of more.
Keep writing.

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