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Array ( [sid] => 48745 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Forest Of Equilibrium [time] => 2004-05-23 02:35:19 [hometext] => To The One Who Inspires Me [bodytext] => Oh i flow
to thee unknown
as i lay
in a feild of moans
under
a emystar lit night
and ahhh
a voice whispers
as sensations call me home,
Dancing shadows
explode
innervisions crescendo
cause this time
love is mine
teardrops of joy fall
and a river flows,
Forest of equilibrium
is so soothing
and i
always wanna feel this way
oh i'm flying high,
It's fantastic
yes it's stunning
i am so amazed
as i melt
and slowly flow away
under
a emystar lit night.
[comments] => 4 [counter] => 190 [topic] => 19 [informant] => secretwind [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 15 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => InspirationalPoems )

Forest Of Equilibrium

Contributed by secretwind on Sunday, 23rd May 2004 @ 02:35:19 AM in AEST
Topic: InspirationalPoems

Oh i flow
to thee unknown
as i lay
in a feild of moans
under
a emystar lit night
and ahhh
a voice whispers
as sensations call me home,
Dancing shadows
explode
innervisions crescendo
cause this time
love is mine
teardrops of joy fall
and a river flows,
Forest of equilibrium
is so soothing
and i
always wanna feel this way
oh i'm flying high,
It's fantastic
yes it's stunning
i am so amazed
as i melt
and slowly flow away
under
a emystar lit night.

Copyright © secretwind ... [ 2004-05-23 02:35:19]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Forest Of Equilibrium (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Sunday, 23rd May 2004 @ 02:40:14 AM AEST
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awww this is so pretty and sweet, emy will love it! hugs n' love nessa

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Re: Forest Of Equilibrium (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Sunday, 23rd May 2004 @ 04:40:44 AM AEST
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Ssshhhhhhhheewwwww!
This one has me wanting to cry at the sweetness in this write.
U really know how to make a girl feel special.
Feel them heavenly flames rising again.
wow!
I'm really speechless.
Delicious write.
luv, huggs, floating away,
emy

Re: Forest Of Equilibrium (User Rating: 1 )
by AnGeL_M on Sunday, 23rd May 2004 @ 02:06:17 PM AEST
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A Beautiful Sweet Loving Poem Secretwind :-) Loved & Enjoyed This Alot !!!!!
I Can Tell Emy Did To LoL !!!!! Masterfully Written :-) Keep Em Coming :-)
Hugs , Love & God Bless
LoVe - AnGeL

Re: Forest Of Equilibrium (User Rating: 1 )
by lovingcritters on Friday, 28th May 2004 @ 01:48:56 AM AEST
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How inspirational Secretwind......you've almost given it away. She's a wonderful friend, and I've adopted her as my daughter too! What a sweet write for her to view.
Poetic hugs
consue

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