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Array ( [sid] => 48734 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => PLEASE DON'T PUT MY HEART BACK [time] => 2004-05-22 23:41:50 [hometext] => Men with authority and power can ruin lives! This poem is about my 24 year old son, and what he is expected to put up with at the work place! [bodytext] =>

'PLEASE DON'T PUT MY HEART BACK!"

the height, the depth, the width
of feelings, I simply feel too much.
please do not put my heart back,
for others to touch. if I'm hurt
I can endure, but what about
those we love? there is simply
no cure for injustice of grave
gravity, fine, reasonable, chastely,
young, inexperienced, pliable,
eager to please. I stand on the
side lines comprehending both
sides, my heart so sensitive for
others feelings, hides, where
are their loyalties, unreasonable,
betrayers, power believers,
unscrupulous ways. day in
and day out, never change,
like infectious mange. their unfeeling
hearts covered over, no care,
no concerns, hate anyone good,
will never be grown men, nor
know manhood, please don't
put my heart back, I can no
longer stand the hurts. they
have no feelings, hurting
others, they've become power
hungry, authoritiative,
intimidating, manipulating experts,
even insisting now, obedience
to them even if those under
them know it is wrong and unwise!


Created by
Cheri Cam LeBren
May 22, 2004
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
"You can have power over people as long
as you don't take everything away from them.
But when you've robbed a man of everything
he's no longer in your power!"
~Alekandr I. Solzhenitsyn~

"Sick people without smiles" [comments] => 5 [counter] => 221 [topic] => 32 [informant] => lovingcritters [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 15 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )
PLEASE DON'T PUT MY HEART BACK

Contributed by lovingcritters on Saturday, 22nd May 2004 @ 11:41:50 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry





'PLEASE DON'T PUT MY HEART BACK!"

the height, the depth, the width
of feelings, I simply feel too much.
please do not put my heart back,
for others to touch. if I'm hurt
I can endure, but what about
those we love? there is simply
no cure for injustice of grave
gravity, fine, reasonable, chastely,
young, inexperienced, pliable,
eager to please. I stand on the
side lines comprehending both
sides, my heart so sensitive for
others feelings, hides, where
are their loyalties, unreasonable,
betrayers, power believers,
unscrupulous ways. day in
and day out, never change,
like infectious mange. their unfeeling
hearts covered over, no care,
no concerns, hate anyone good,
will never be grown men, nor
know manhood, please don't
put my heart back, I can no
longer stand the hurts. they
have no feelings, hurting
others, they've become power
hungry, authoritiative,
intimidating, manipulating experts,
even insisting now, obedience
to them even if those under
them know it is wrong and unwise!


Created by
Cheri Cam LeBren
May 22, 2004
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
"You can have power over people as long
as you don't take everything away from them.
But when you've robbed a man of everything
he's no longer in your power!"
~Alekandr I. Solzhenitsyn~

"Sick people without smiles"




Copyright © lovingcritters ... [ 2004-05-22 23:41:50]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: PLEASE DON'T PUT MY HEART BACK (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Sunday, 23rd May 2004 @ 12:20:55 AM AEST
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Very good, mom.
Luv it.
luv, huggs,
emy


Re: PLEASE DON'T PUT MY HEART BACK (User Rating: 1 )
by AnGeL_M on Sunday, 23rd May 2004 @ 12:22:20 AM AEST
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Aww This Was Sad & Very Powerful Write !!! Written Well :-)
Hugs Love & God Bless !!!!!!!!!
LoVe - AnGeL



Re: PLEASE DON'T PUT MY HEART BACK (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Sunday, 23rd May 2004 @ 12:39:32 AM AEST
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powerful expression:) hugs n' love nessa

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Re: PLEASE DON'T PUT MY HEART BACK (User Rating: 1 )
by AspenGlow on Sunday, 23rd May 2004 @ 03:28:42 AM AEST
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When we think of something else to resolve the conflicts, other than war, maybe then reason and sanity will return to us.

Very good write.


Re: PLEASE DON'T PUT MY HEART BACK (User Rating: 1 )
by Ilhar on Sunday, 23rd May 2004 @ 06:50:57 AM AEST
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well written, Peace, Harmony, Love, Truth and Light

Shari




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