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[title] => Love is not real
[time] => 2004-05-22 22:25:26
[hometext] => a pessimistic, realistic, depressing view on love...no format don't comment on that but I'm happy to hear other comments. My worste poem yet...i'm tired and bored, and i'm sorry
[bodytext] => The beautiful lies of love cover up the truth of no set path or destiny, no love was meant to be, no love at all was ever truely real. Love is destined to make sure, that death and depression remain obscure to your reality. Love is for a fairytale but love cannot be proven unreal because a unicorn or an elf you know you can't touch, and love is something that they say you feel, that doesn't help the realists very much. If such feelings do exist than why does it lack definition which has illuded theory and philosophy and until all is given up love will be an undefined, 11 in a dictonary and not one has the word "hate" or "pain" is webster untouched by the darker side or did he just think that all the ugliness be put aside along with the pieces of the fallen soldier's pride which holds onto hope made up from a heart which refused to accept defeat.
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Love is not real
Contributed by
rightwingbrknwing
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Saturday, 22nd May 2004 @ 10:25:26 PM in AEST
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The beautiful lies of love cover up the truth of no set path or destiny, no love was meant to be, no love at all was ever truely real. Love is destined to make sure, that death and depression remain obscure to your reality. Love is for a fairytale but love cannot be proven unreal because a unicorn or an elf you know you can't touch, and love is something that they say you feel, that doesn't help the realists very much. If such feelings do exist than why does it lack definition which has illuded theory and philosophy and until all is given up love will be an undefined, 11 in a dictonary and not one has the word "hate" or "pain" is webster untouched by the darker side or did he just think that all the ugliness be put aside along with the pieces of the fallen soldier's pride which holds onto hope made up from a heart which refused to accept defeat.
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Re: Love is not real
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by hoist1atca on
Saturday, 22nd May 2004 @ 10:58:30 PM AEST
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Sometimes love is just an illusion-
I also post on
poetry.com
houk.joseph
check it out and let
me know if it is the same way for you...
JDHOUK@HOTMAIL.COM
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Re: Love is not real
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by indiradesha on
Saturday, 22nd May 2004 @ 11:00:08 PM AEST
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| who needs format? i like the natural rythm. its an view that can be identified with, i feel. because love is so intangible at times, and at others so very present. thank you for sharing. |
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Re: Love is not real
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by hoist1atca on
Saturday, 22nd May 2004 @ 11:00:48 PM AEST
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I did think your poem was true to heart-
Sometimes love can be decieving-
You have a way with words-
good job |
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