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Array ( [sid] => 48718 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Changes [time] => 2004-05-22 21:21:17 [hometext] => questions with no answers that i can find.. just feeling down right now [bodytext] => Changes that occur,
In the inside of ones mind,
The hurts and pains,
Of lifes mistakes,
The innocence of a child.

All too often freely,
We give our love too much,
In hope our love is never taken briefly,
Never taken with mistrust.

Is it a lie?
To want that special love,
You've wanted all your life,
To hold you in his arms,
And never make you cry.

Is it wrong?
To want one love,
Until the day you die,
To have him treat you special,
To walk with you through life,
No matter what you've done wrong,
To always love you beyond all else.

Do you feel sadness?
Once you have throwen your love away,
To never know For certain,
If things could have worked out,
If you had treated her just as special,
If you had only given her the chance,
To walk with you through life,

I guess now,
You've made your stand,
Tossed my love aside,
I guess now you'll never know,
Just how much our love could have growen. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 257 [topic] => 21 [informant] => chrissylee [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems )

Changes

Contributed by chrissylee on Saturday, 22nd May 2004 @ 09:21:17 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

Changes that occur,
In the inside of ones mind,
The hurts and pains,
Of lifes mistakes,
The innocence of a child.

All too often freely,
We give our love too much,
In hope our love is never taken briefly,
Never taken with mistrust.

Is it a lie?
To want that special love,
You've wanted all your life,
To hold you in his arms,
And never make you cry.

Is it wrong?
To want one love,
Until the day you die,
To have him treat you special,
To walk with you through life,
No matter what you've done wrong,
To always love you beyond all else.

Do you feel sadness?
Once you have throwen your love away,
To never know For certain,
If things could have worked out,
If you had treated her just as special,
If you had only given her the chance,
To walk with you through life,

I guess now,
You've made your stand,
Tossed my love aside,
I guess now you'll never know,
Just how much our love could have growen.

Copyright © chrissylee ... [ 2004-05-22 21:21:17]
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Re: Changes (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Saturday, 22nd May 2004 @ 09:41:17 PM AEST
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awww chrissy, so sad and beautifully written, so many questions, all good ones, no its not wrong; but natural to want love in your life, but finding someone true and genuine is not all that easy, hang in there, he is out there for you, your a beautiful lady with so much to offer, talented, loving and sweet, any man who cannot see you for who you really are is a putz, am sending you a huge hug, im always here for you sweetie, loves ya, nessa

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Re: Changes (User Rating: 1 )
by AspenGlow on Sunday, 23rd May 2004 @ 04:13:30 AM AEST
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Are changes really changes, or do we blind ourselves out of the lonliness of being alone.

I like this much, very good write.

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