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Array ( [sid] => 48709 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Babe... Just Smile For Me [time] => 2004-05-22 20:09:32 [hometext] => I just wrote this... this afternoon... wasn't really thinking of anyone in particular... maybe myself... I dunno... Tinkkerbelle... thanks for the inspiration... and just smile for me... lol [bodytext] => Your life has had its ups and its downs
You've lived life through all of the simple and difficult frowns
Alone... you've sat...
Alone... you've cried...
Through a world of hate and tears... you've tried...
To hide all of your pain and all of your sorrows inside...
Wondering if there'll ever be anymore tomorrows
'Cause your life has been all wrong...
Like words sung in a song
A ballad that sounds out of place...
When sung with a heavy metal drum beat and bass
For this... you can't even save face...
So... you... just smile...

Babe... just smile for me
Even when things aren't going well.. it would seem
'Cause nobody's gonna tell... the difference... somehow... of...
What's going on behind those beautiful eyes
If you'll just smile for me ...
Everything's gonna be all right
Babe... just smile for me...

The pain is like a sliver of glass
Drove deep into ur heart to last
The pain keeps pricking inside and the hurting begins... tonight...
With every little thing you do...
The pain just sends a shot right through ... your life
And it cuts like a sharp knife
So... you... just smile...

Babe... just smile for me
Even when things aren't going well... it would seem
'Cause nobody's gonna tell... the difference... somehow... of...
What's going on behind those beautiful eyes
If you'll just smile for me...
Everything's gonna be all right
Babe... just smile for me...

Won't... you smile... for me...? [comments] => 3 [counter] => 204 [topic] => 48 [informant] => kidpoet_213 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )
Babe... Just Smile For Me

Contributed by kidpoet_213 on Saturday, 22nd May 2004 @ 08:09:32 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



Your life has had its ups and its downs
You've lived life through all of the simple and difficult frowns
Alone... you've sat...
Alone... you've cried...
Through a world of hate and tears... you've tried...
To hide all of your pain and all of your sorrows inside...
Wondering if there'll ever be anymore tomorrows
'Cause your life has been all wrong...
Like words sung in a song
A ballad that sounds out of place...
When sung with a heavy metal drum beat and bass
For this... you can't even save face...
So... you... just smile...

Babe... just smile for me
Even when things aren't going well.. it would seem
'Cause nobody's gonna tell... the difference... somehow... of...
What's going on behind those beautiful eyes
If you'll just smile for me ...
Everything's gonna be all right
Babe... just smile for me...

The pain is like a sliver of glass
Drove deep into ur heart to last
The pain keeps pricking inside and the hurting begins... tonight...
With every little thing you do...
The pain just sends a shot right through ... your life
And it cuts like a sharp knife
So... you... just smile...

Babe... just smile for me
Even when things aren't going well... it would seem
'Cause nobody's gonna tell... the difference... somehow... of...
What's going on behind those beautiful eyes
If you'll just smile for me...
Everything's gonna be all right
Babe... just smile for me...

Won't... you smile... for me...?




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Re: Babe... Just Smile For Me (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Saturday, 22nd May 2004 @ 08:32:21 PM AEST
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Hey now,
u got it going on with this one. No one can read this without smiling.
that's what it takes is jus a smile. Before u know it that smile will come back around when ya need it most.
yo momma so proud of u girl.
this one is a masterpeice, for sure 'cause we all need smiles.
luv, huggs,
yo momma,
emy


Re: Babe... Just Smile For Me (User Rating: 1 )
by liquidsunshine on Saturday, 22nd May 2004 @ 08:54:28 PM AEST
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It is a rather smiley poem, so you're accomplishing that! Great write, I like it a lot.
Bravo and encore
Love,
Chelsea


Re: Babe... Just Smile For Me (User Rating: 1 )
by reilt on Sunday, 23rd May 2004 @ 01:09:28 PM AEST
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a beautiful poem you are obviously a very good hearted and caring person with so much love to give. i hope you get that smile.




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